Monsoon Song-2 Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Monsoon Song-2

Rating: 5.0


Quiet your heart, hear the rain sing
Let it lull your inner storms to sleep
It sings not of past you want to bury
Nor of tomorrow you wish to foresee
It sings of present, this moment
You must live and cherish.

Nosheen Irfan © 2017

Friday, July 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The moment sometimes called life.Superb.!

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Akhtar Jawad 07 July 2017

It sings of present, this moment You must live and cherish.............. Let us forget the past, let us be carefree of future, there must be a moment in life when present dominates. Rains provide such a lovely moment.

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Muhammad Ali 07 July 2017

Beautiful message of wisdom, just like a meditation of the presence, yes presence is all life is.

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Valsa George 07 July 2017

A sparkling gem.......! Yes, listen to the sweet refrain of the rain and learn to enjoy the moment at hand!

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Susan Williams 18 July 2017

It sings of present, this moment You must live and cherish. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Love the way you worded this and how we should endeavor to live fully each moment we're given on this earth- - - you have such a tender way of writing, an elegance- a compassion. Another Nosheen gem, my dear.10+++++++++

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Daniel Brick 11 July 2017

Nothing I say in prose can match the deep vision of this spiritual moment you capture in verse. You are the impressario of wonder, with the help of sensory enclosure in the rain and the help of the intimate emotions. This is a touch of heavenly bliss on earth. It is a suspended moment which makes us appreciate the benefits of heartfelt feelings. It answers your poem WOMANS PLEA, one is about social reality, the other about spiritual reality, both are crucial.

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

This is magnificent, Nosheen. It reminds me of both (the great film) Monsoon Wedding and what happened the day I saw it. Any poem that can evoke so many great memories....a real gem.

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Edmund Strolis 08 July 2017

I believe a poet hears the patter upon the roof before others do and welcomes it as an old friend. Nature insisting upon our attention We close our eyes and enjoy the song.. A song for open hearts for today and not for tomorrow or yesterday. Wash our cares away................

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Barry Middleton 08 July 2017

Ah rain. The rainy season has also arrived in Florida. I love it.You have captured the joy of a rainy night perfectly. I love it.

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Lahore, Pakistan
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