Quiet your heart, hear the rain sing
Let it lull your inner storms to sleep
It sings not of past you want to bury
Nor of tomorrow you wish to foresee
It sings of present, this moment
You must live and cherish.
Nosheen Irfan © 2017
It sings of present, this moment You must live and cherish.............. Let us forget the past, let us be carefree of future, there must be a moment in life when present dominates. Rains provide such a lovely moment.
Beautiful message of wisdom, just like a meditation of the presence, yes presence is all life is.
A sparkling gem.......! Yes, listen to the sweet refrain of the rain and learn to enjoy the moment at hand!
It sings of present, this moment You must live and cherish. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Love the way you worded this and how we should endeavor to live fully each moment we're given on this earth- - - you have such a tender way of writing, an elegance- a compassion. Another Nosheen gem, my dear.10+++++++++
Nothing I say in prose can match the deep vision of this spiritual moment you capture in verse. You are the impressario of wonder, with the help of sensory enclosure in the rain and the help of the intimate emotions. This is a touch of heavenly bliss on earth. It is a suspended moment which makes us appreciate the benefits of heartfelt feelings. It answers your poem WOMANS PLEA, one is about social reality, the other about spiritual reality, both are crucial.
This is magnificent, Nosheen. It reminds me of both (the great film) Monsoon Wedding and what happened the day I saw it. Any poem that can evoke so many great memories....a real gem.
I believe a poet hears the patter upon the roof before others do and welcomes it as an old friend. Nature insisting upon our attention We close our eyes and enjoy the song.. A song for open hearts for today and not for tomorrow or yesterday. Wash our cares away................
Ah rain. The rainy season has also arrived in Florida. I love it.You have captured the joy of a rainy night perfectly. I love it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The moment sometimes called life.Superb.!