Moon's Child Poem by Savita Tyagi

Moon's Child

Rating: 5.0


Night is stygian sans of stars
Dark mood shares kinship
With black sky of new moon
Moon's jubilant child I am shedding
The gloom under full moon's glow

Monday, September 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 21 October 2014

(This is the fourth time I started typing my response. Something keeps erasing my text!) SO IT GOES, as Billy Pilgrim used to say. - No stars shine in the night sky. Nothing illuminates the night. And that blank black sky parallels a dark mood among humanity, one reflecting the other, accentuating this grim situation. But you are the moon's jubilant child, you embody the pure light of the New Moon, and when it shines on things it brings emotional light as well. This is a mysterious rescue (I referred to Elizabeth Bishop's poem ONE ART in my text message. Serendipity! It's Today's Poem on the HOME PAGE.)

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Poem with great meaning. Dark mood shares kinship to bloom into a full moon. Loved the imagery of words.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 October 2014

The determination to grow up a new dark moon into a full moon, looks like that of a mother. This is how I understand but Savita knows better. The short poem is beautiful.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 October 2014

A poem of great depth. Is crescent moon seen as the full moon that shed its glow to spread gloom? A wonderful image delivered in the poem. Thank you.

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Ramesh Rai 29 September 2014

Words chosen are amazing. wonderful imagery skip. feeling just a full moon asking the crescent moon how do i look. perhaps only an artist can expect this only , rest may take otherwise who are you to judge me. superb.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 January 2022

On the corpus of this beautiful poem, I wish you happy new year dear madam...stay blessed by the bless of God

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 August 2021

Revisiting... magnificent poem!

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Varsha M 01 February 2021

Moon's child makes it brilliant bright once again.

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Varsha M 01 February 2021

Moon sans stars is dull indeed

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 January 2021

A brilliant little work on nature! I read your recent poem...a poem of value and great substance but unfortunately I couldn't place my comment there because you have closed your comment box for that specific poem!

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