## More Than A Bomb Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

lovely piece......I liked the idea a lot...10

better the spray than to have him stay, to create more of the same.

that's bit violent..but strong words 'shot dead with spray'..nice expressions sir..10+++

very deep indeed. gud write

It desrves attention, much depth in it. CP

how we fill our homes with toxins!

chemical warfare? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? lol...............

Another excellent senryu poem, samanyan. Your reference to a bomb and 'shot dead with a spray' eliminates any chance of it being a haiku, since is does not refer purely to nature. Still, your syllable count is correct and the poem is quite expressive, but still a senryu. Carl.

cute..nice write... with sense of humor.. nice idea Sam.. 10 maia

For us it can be bombs but for little creatures it can be a simply spray. In both cases the human mind is the key factor. We can spare man. We can also spare these little creatures. We do create an environment for these little creatures to breed on and then try to extinguish them from earth. Can't we keep our environment better for their less survival? This could be ideal.