Friday, January 5, 2007

Mourning Sickness Comments

Rating: 5.0

For an umpteenth time, I fix my tie
glance at the clock and sigh
The memorial service starts at eight
And as always, we'll be late
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Chuck Audette
COMMENTS
Barry Van Allen 24 April 2007

Chuck, She most likely was a normal person once, besides what you did to her, what have you done to to her ? I just know that you are proud of both. B.V.A.

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Gina Onyemaechi 18 January 2007

Another witty pun. Love, Gina.

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Dee Daffodil 17 January 2007

Awww poor thing...tell her I feel for her...crackers..eat crackers before getting out of bed! Hugs, Dee

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Brian Dorn 09 January 2007

Awesome write, Chuck... your poetry is the perfect fix for 'mourning' sickness. I'm not sure about the morning sickness though? Brian

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alice sunderland 09 January 2007

doubly funny indeed chuckler! ! excellence. al

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Danny Reynolds 08 January 2007

I found this rather inter-resting this two-in-one tale, of things that matter I see a blue line, from the testing and impending sounds of pitter-patter? Danny

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Esther Leclerc 06 January 2007

Worlds of fun and intelligence in your poetry, Chuck, and this is no exception! Thanks for the belly laugh! Est : ]

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Ernestine Northover 06 January 2007

Clever witty poem Charles, very well thought out. I enjoyed it, it had a good story line and a snazzy ending. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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R H 06 January 2007

Astutely penned Chuck. Your observations on life are real and so is your poetry...Justine :)

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Oh yeah, I love it when a snapshot of life is taken to another level like this. Everything works here. Ez

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Alison Cassidy 06 January 2007

That's what good poetry writing is all about - taking a little slice of life and giving it a little something. Quirky, witty penning. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 05 January 2007

Chuck>>>You are trulyan astute Squire of versatile Literature.Many topics...always well expressed... Fjr

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Gaurav Silwal 05 January 2007

I don't know 'mourning sickness' but I think this is a very nice poem : -) .........cheers It is sweet and soft...... Gaurav

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Anna Russell 05 January 2007

Aww, this is a sweet one Chuck. And you listen to Scarlett, she speaks words of wisdom there! Hugs Anna xxx

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Scarlett Treat 05 January 2007

And how is the little mommie to be doing, for real? You had better learn to walk on egshells, old buddy, cause you tread on dangerous ground! !

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