...Mr. Cigarette Poem by Eyan Desir

...Mr. Cigarette

Rating: 5.0


Wrapped in a cylinder
Tobacco's nicotine
Mixed with many flavors
Around soft paper

Watch a cigarette
See a cancer stick
Sentences to slowly
Split innocent lives

Buy a cigarette
An apostle of dead
With germs of Satan!
Working to make you rest

Ignite a cigarette
Taste additive pleasure
A drying's man liquor

Inhale a cigarette
Smell the perfume of dead
Slowing kissing your chest

Learn about cigarettes
Know he's not a friend!

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Pulished work of E.D
14th May 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angel's lyre 03 June 2009

AGREE! ! ! ! ! I hope this poem will make some people not spoil their health. LIFE IS GIVEN ONCE

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Truly expressed. But Satan is there. Love your honest and sincere message. 10+++

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Indira Renganathan 30 May 2009

Known truth knowingly shirked...fate of the present trend...excellent writing....kindly read my 'Agony' 'Beedi rollers', The Smoky Solomon'....Thank you

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Catrina Heart 29 May 2009

Cigarette makes one life always young.....withering young!

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 27 May 2009

All too real for me..lost a brother recently and a father four years ago to the cancer stick..All too real!

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Ron Flowers 14 June 2009

You said it very well, Eyan. A 10 from me. Ron

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this is really good for us young people because everybody i see thats around my age thats all they do and im like yall die early if yall don't stop..

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~Crystal Midnight~ 07 June 2009

Watch a cigarette See a cancer stick this is really good for kids... I always tell my parents when they smoke they are going to get cancer. cigarettes are so gross. I am glad you wrote this. good job. ~CM~

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Lady Grace 04 June 2009

good write, keep writing..grace

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Rosalita Fernandez 04 June 2009

oh...chilling...i smoke but hate that i smoke but this is chilling, good poem i like it

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