Eyan Desir

Rookie - 15 Points (caribbean)

...Mr. Cigarette - Poem by Eyan Desir

Wrapped in a cylinder
Tobacco's nicotine
Mixed with many flavors
Around soft paper

Watch a cigarette
See a cancer stick
Sentences to slowly
Split innocent lives

Buy a cigarette
An apostle of dead
With germs of Satan!
Working to make you rest

Ignite a cigarette
Taste additive pleasure
A drying's man liquor

Inhale a cigarette
Smell the perfume of dead
Slowing kissing your chest

Learn about cigarettes
Know he's not a friend!

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Pulished work of E.D
14th May 2009

Comments about ...Mr. Cigarette by Eyan Desir

  • (6/14/2009 8:22:00 AM)

    You said it very well, Eyan. A 10 from me.

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  • (6/13/2009 5:44:00 PM)

    this is really good for us young people because everybody i see thats around my age thats all they do and im like yall die early if yall don't stop.. (Report) Reply

  • (6/7/2009 7:48:00 PM)

    Watch a cigarette
    See a cancer stick
    this is really good for kids... I always tell my parents when they smoke they are going to get cancer. cigarettes are so gross. I am glad you wrote this. good job.
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  • (6/4/2009 7:23:00 PM)

    good write, keep writing..grace (Report) Reply

  • (6/4/2009 6:24:00 PM)

    oh...chilling...i smoke but hate that i smoke but this is chilling, good poem i like it (Report) Reply

  • (6/3/2009 12:48:00 PM)

    AGREE! ! ! ! !
    I hope this poem will make some people not spoil their health.
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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/30/2009 6:01:00 AM)

    Truly expressed. But Satan is there.
    Love your honest and sincere message.
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  • Indira Renganathan (5/30/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Known truth knowingly shirked...fate of the present trend...excellent writing....kindly read my 'Agony' 'Beedi rollers', The Smoky Solomon'....Thank you (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2009 1:58:00 AM)

    Cigarette makes one life always young.....withering young! (Report) Reply

  • (5/27/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    All too real for me..lost a brother recently and a father four years ago to the cancer stick..All too real! (Report) Reply

  • Fay Slimm (5/27/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    Very sound reasons for stopping the smoking habit - - 10 from Fay (Report) Reply

  • (5/27/2009 1:15:00 AM)

    Ah, one of the many things in this world that will kill you, but people do it anyways.
    I'm not sure if you meant 'addictive' where you spelt 'additive? '

    Pretty straightforward, but undoubtedly true; the kiss of death from a cigarettes breath.
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (5/26/2009 11:43:00 PM)

    I am not a smoker but I can admire your Mr. Cigarette. Should be displaced
    everywhere. Smokeless 10 for this anti-smoking piece of write.
    Best Wishes
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  • Is It Poetry James Mclain (5/26/2009 9:51:00 PM)

    it is death as i puff myself into the smooth tobacco leaf eternal embrace..im not Yul Brenner but cigarette smoking will kills ya...iip (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2009 6:19:00 PM)

    I guess it is ok, to long to fit on package though. (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2009 5:14:00 PM)

    I am not a smoker and hate it too, should use this on the bill boards, smoking shelters for Smokers to see, Very Good. (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2009 3:44:00 PM)

    VERY good poem! I have a similar poem, which I wrote a while back- entitled: SMOKERS- please read and comment if you have the time! (Report) Reply

  • (5/26/2009 12:42:00 PM)

    ya sure, it is touching poem, deep meaning
    to all smokers please stop smoking
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  • (5/26/2009 7:18:00 AM)

    I love it. It is simple and proves a point. You brilliantly pieced this one together. Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Smiley Hooker (5/26/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    this is quite a sensible poem, dear Eyan! cigarettes won't just make you rest to death but make you suffer first. if a smoker cannot just throw away their addiction to cigarettes i hope they'll be responsible enough to keep it to themselves. the effect to second smokers is even worse. i hope cigarettes won't blow away the smoker's conscience. two thumbs up and 10++++++++smiles for you! a must read! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

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