Dislocated Heart

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*my All... * - Poem by Dislocated Heart

Your shinin like a star,
So bright that when we're apart,
It still seems like,
The distances is barely there..

Our hearts,
that connects us all,
We'll never be apart..

I'll love from the very start.
Nothin, will change that.
Nothin, will change that.

One thing for you to keep
Is this very key,
That opens up my heart.. just for you to see,
the love I have to give, and my Heart to love you with.

All the love I have,
All I've got to give,
I wanna give it all to you.


Comments about *my All... * by Dislocated Heart

  • Mayra Cerda (2/9/2010 1:49:00 PM)

    i like the way you open up your heart like that on a poem nice :) (Report)Reply

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  • Meagan Slack (5/6/2009 11:42:00 AM)

    Wow its so refreshing to hear a guy speak like that.. i really love how you are very open and vulnerable.. keep writing (Report)Reply

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  • Kerli Undead (2/10/2009 12:03:00 PM)

    wow...
    your peoms have such wonderfull feelings that give off, i love them
    ~kerli
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  • Stacey Watts (11/29/2008 4:57:00 PM)

    Really a heart felt piece. Great job. (Report)Reply

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  • ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (11/27/2008 3:52:00 PM)

    On a scale of 1-10.....15 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 4, 2008



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