My Bud And Me Poem by Mark Dillon

My Bud And Me

Rating: 4.9


When I get home at half past four,
my feet just dragging across the floor.
I just open the fridge and grab a beer.
It's icy cold and crystal clear.
I just pop that cap and lower it down
and feel the ease of ache and frown.
Agh, there are some things worth waiting for,
like an ice cold beer just ready to pour.

With a nights work done and the world still asleep.
I just kick off my boots and to my balcony creep.
Then sit and relax and watch the dawning of the day.
And see the river below me flow on its merry way.
Another beer in hand and a smile on my face.
Glad to be alive by Gods good grace.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
mmm tastes good.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 28 July 2012

Excellent poem - very descriptive, and I can just imagine that ice-cold beer (though personally I would prefer a cider) . Very well written.

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Godfrey Morris 02 August 2012

Lovely I feel relax by just reading. Good job on this one.

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R.j. Wynn 14 June 2013

It's a good feeling isn't it

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Akanksha Bhatt 16 October 2012

awesome poem! keep it up dear!

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Karen Sinclair 21 August 2012

Cool! beer and a soul whos happy with his lot. This gives the same warmth as a lovely bowl of soup...there is no greater time to watch Mother Nature in her prime than when she first wakes... i do the balcony thing, last thing at night and first thing in the morning, theres no place im happier than just sitting there relishing nature...Lovely piece tyvm karen

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Alan Reed 07 August 2012

nicely done - cute\concise - Alan

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Marieta Maglas 06 August 2012

Our life is very simple-instead of enjoying its beauty we make it be so complicated-wonderful poem, lovely to read.

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