Have you ever seen?
Have you ever been?
Where I live, its home
Here my first smile shone.
Some day I will leave it
To soar over new summit.
Then will I be all alone,
In my future dream home?
Very sweet! Very meaningful. too... rhyming also! Even as a child you had a glimpse of a home in the summit where you 'll go all alone leaving your earthly home!
Though you wrote that it's your childhood poem, but it's a very matured one and fine too. I wish you not to be alone in your new home even! !
A great poem, to revisit once past writings can show how far you have come in life and in writing.
The poem was written in your childhood, but it is not at all childish. Even as a child you had the vision of soaring over a new 'summit', that's really wonderful!
nice one.... good childhood memory...10 childhood spent in neighborhood with all friends till attained adulthood
Yes a very good poem about childhood. Read mine - - Home Is - Adeline
That was lovely. Well penned. I hope you are not alone in your new home though.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely and nice start of attractive poems.10