My Dialogue With Soul Poem by mamutty CHOLA

My Dialogue With Soul

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MY DIALOGUE WITH SOUL

Often I talk to my soul while alone
Asked my soul why the world has becomeso selfish

Said soul when so much depredation is on
When very one is concerned about self

Whatever regime came to power,
They have sold dreams to the people

Remove poverty was used as slogan,
Those regime formed in the name of
Poor they too becamepredators

Many revolutions came and many regimes formed
But style of regime always remain self centered

The day the rulers understand their
Authority as their responsibility
That would be the real revolution
For poor in the country

Saidsoul she felt suffocated and depressed
And my body has becomea prison for soul

Would pray to God either free human from the misery'
Else do not givesuch punishment in the name of life

I said I have decided to live with hope, smile and happiness
Hearing my resolve Soul smiled and saidshe wouldgive
company to me provided if I could live life with smile

Friday, November 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: lyric
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 13 November 2020

'The day the rulers understand their Authority as their responsibility That would be the real revolution For poor in the country' - You are absolutely right. I fully agree with you. You had a productive dialogue with your soul.

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 November 2020

Said soul she felt suffocated and depressed And my body has become a prison for soul Would pray to God either free human from the misery' Else do not give such punishment in the name of life.../// excellent philosophical dialogue between two in one existence; great write really; I enjoyed the soul one.... congrats for being selected this poem as POD......5*****

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 November 2020

A well composed poem of the day.... Truly marvelous. Congrats on your featured piece....5 stars *****

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Rajnish Manga 20 November 2020

The day the rulers understand their Authority as their responsibility That would be the real revolution For poor in the country.... //.... Each word an eye-opener, each word reveals/ But it's the right diagnosis which only heals. Thanks.

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Varsha M 20 November 2020

Your dialogue is very true. This is the real scenario. Where from weed comes no one knows but it does come. Destroying all. A little effort to rightly sieve once again gathers good ones to barn. Congratulations for being chosen as POD.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 January 2022

Everyone should at times converse with one's inner self. Everyone needs to listen as often as possible, to one's soul. "Soul Searching ", they say. Very poignant writing, sir.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 November 2020

Often I talk to my soul while alone Asked my soul why the world has become so selfish A question that has no reply. A great poem, a nice selection as members' poem. Congrats!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 20 November 2020

The rulers need to resign. AI would do a better job without emotion.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 November 2020

The day the rulers understand their Authority as their responsibility That would be the real revolution For poor in the country This is a wonderful thinking. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 November 2020

Inner self, Act of the soul! ! ! ! Able to reason up with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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