My Eyes Can See Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

My Eyes Can See

Rating: 5.0


My eyes can see what lies before
And nothing that is left behind,
For all the days that I have lived
No more than memories in my mind.

No need for me to dwell no more
And watch the shadows fade away,
From distant dreams now look ahead
For there my thoughts will always stay.

For now the future seems so clear
And tears I shall no longer cry,
My restless spirit is at peace
So I shall spread my wings and fly.

For too long I've been burdened with
The worries that have made me weak,
And now I feel I'm free at last
To find the joy that I do seek.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kathleen West 06 November 2008

Another beautiful poem written with hope. I'm glad your eyes were opened to everything before you. Very well written, a ten from me. Kind regards, Kathleen

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Silence Dogood 06 November 2008

a beautiful poem filled with so much hope love the lines and the whole Idea

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Ramesh T A 06 November 2008

Yes, you are free only if you come out of the world of imagination and the see reality which is full of wonder to discover as you fly high in the air!

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Tsira Goge 10 May 2009

For too long I've been burdened with The worries that have made me weak, And now I feel I'm free at last To find the joy that I do seek. .......................................... Andrew, These are remarkable a words, but I think that the careful person is the most reliable in freedom.. 10.. All best, Tsira

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Ernestine Northover 09 November 2008

Lovely news Andrew. Beautifully expressed in this poem. As always I so enjoy reading your work. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 09 November 2008

Ah...when the spirit sours, nothing can compare or beat it Well done again with this one Andrew Both, the rhyming structure and content are beautiful Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 08 November 2008

A delightful poem Andrew, lovely sentiments so clearly expressed! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Lynda Robson 07 November 2008

A wonderfully uplifting poem Andrew, we have to leave the past behind and move on, even though sometimes it is hard to do, Lynda xx *10*

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