ramesh rai

Gold Star - 27,298 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

My Fiance - Poem by ramesh rai

My fiance is a calm moon
bestowed with insightful vision

My fiance is a blazing sun
can burn the hottest wind

My fiance is drizzling rain
soothes always in my vein

My fiance is spring season
charns always every viewer

It is the natural habit
every one is proud of his fiance.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about My Fiance by ramesh rai

  • Saheb Mohapatra (11/7/2014 6:31:00 AM)

    nature and love when combined gives a poignant poem like this...........greatly enjoyed it........thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (10/30/2014 6:43:00 AM)

    Anybody who finds a beauty lying in almost every object is basically a very peaceful and wise person, here also it echoes the same thyme (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (10/30/2014 3:59:00 AM)

    Nature's beauty is a symbol of the highest honour given as a gift of love and admiration!
    Stunning write!
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/29/2014 8:06:00 PM)

    Lucky are those for whom every element of nature becomes a fiance. Life thus becomes worth living. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/26/2014 3:04:00 AM)

    beautiful lines....love to nature glimpse in each line....nice (Report)Reply

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  • Mantu Mahakul (10/25/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    Very nice description about fiancé. Fiancé dazzles like sun and calms like moon. Very wonderful composition. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (10/24/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    Nice, beautiful, lovely but many others love her too. (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (10/23/2014 1:24:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. Everyone is proud of his fiance. Very true said by Neela. Your fiance is nature....

    Loved reading it.
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  • (10/21/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    Your fiance is Nature.A lovely write! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 22, 2014


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