My Fiance Poem by ramesh rai

My Fiance

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My fiance is a calm moon
bestowed with insightful vision

My fiance is a blazing sun
can burn the hottest wind

My fiance is drizzling rain
soothes always in my vein

My fiance is spring season
charns always every viewer

It is the natural habit
every one is proud of his fiance.

Tuesday, October 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
Mantu Mahakul 25 October 2014

Very nice description about fiancé. Fiancé dazzles like sun and calms like moon. Very wonderful composition.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2014

Nice, beautiful, lovely but many others love her too.

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Everyone is proud of his fiance. Very true said by Neela. Your fiance is nature.... Loved reading it.

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Neela Nath Das 21 October 2014

Your fiance is Nature.A lovely write!

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Saheb Mohapatra 07 November 2014

nature and love when combined gives a poignant poem like this...........greatly enjoyed it........thanks.

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Amitava Sur 30 October 2014

Anybody who finds a beauty lying in almost every object is basically a very peaceful and wise person, here also it echoes the same thyme

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Hazel Durham 30 October 2014

Nature's beauty is a symbol of the highest honour given as a gift of love and admiration! Stunning write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 October 2014

Lucky are those for whom every element of nature becomes a fiance. Life thus becomes worth living. Thank you.

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Salini Nair 26 October 2014

beautiful to nature glimpse in each line....nice

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