My Goal Poem by Queeny Gona

My Goal

Rating: 5.0


Change my heart oh god!
Let thy blood cleanse my soul,
Mold me in thy hands:
Create in me a new heart.
To lead a life as thy child;
To share your word with all,
Proclaim you as the lord almighty!
Thus lead your chosen people to thy way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 30 October 2009

A very good composition Qeeny. A wonderful prayer.....Yes we join our voices too in your prayers....

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Eyan Desir 30 October 2009

Me too, me too., me to nice write..

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Surya . 27 October 2009

wonderful thought.wonderful poem voted10 surya

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 October 2009

very grateful to be the 2nd to comment here!

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Kesav Easwaran 27 October 2009

nice poem prayer Queeny...cleansing all over there...i liked...10 please read mine- A Part Prayer Divine...it relates

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Valsa George 20 May 2017

God alone can transform us into better beings and cleanse us from our sinful state. We should also strive for such a regeneration ! A beautiful prayer!

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Siddartha Montik 18 December 2016

Wish I remember these lines as my Prayer! ! thanks for this Queeny! ! 10++++! !

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 22 May 2010

beautiful prayer... Gona... your short poems are excellent..... keep your style, its unique..

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Sam Ch 19 May 2010

Good Prayer that GOD also want from the same from ALL

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Shelly Shelly 04 November 2009

i do agree....it's really a nice prayer..nice meaning..and innocence build in..

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