My Imaginative Life Poem by kafil uddin raihan.

My Imaginative Life

Rating: 5.0


A moon lit night,
A little boat is waving,
A torn sail is dancing,
A dim hurricane is lighting,
Only a boatman on the boat,
Singing an old vaatially song,
Dreaming of his wife
Waiting for him in a hut,
This is about my imaginative life,
I don't know how It feels,
But my heart cries for it,
A simple life in naked eyes,
A complex struggle of life,
A complete satisfaction of soul,
With all joys and sorrows of life,
One can figure out a new taste,
A new man in a new world,
The world within this world,
Different from rest of it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 02 September 2009

Good dream written out poetically. Nice writing bringing out usage of imagination that all readers can relate to. We all imagine and dream, that is where I get most of my material from. The mind is a wonderful thing to share. DC

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Carol Gall 02 September 2009

really good like this one 10

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Joseph Poewhit 02 September 2009

Simole ways of life, hold much beauty.

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Marieta Maglas 02 September 2009

vivid imagination, well written poem, lovely to read..............10+++

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Will Barber 31 December 2009

The clear imagery reflects a clear longing for a peaceful space. May you find it. I enjoyed this very much.

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

stupendous written piece......great theme in clarity! ! ! 10

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Ejaz Khan 02 September 2009

A good poem, one really need a calm corner of one's own!

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 02 September 2009

a dramatic life! a simple and clear perspective! I liked your life full of simplicity contrary to this complicated world well expressed. 10+++++

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Mubeen Sadhika 02 September 2009

Pretty nice poem. Well penned. Liked a lot. Deserves 10+

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