My Inspiration (A Friend) Poem by lady grace

My Inspiration (A Friend)

Rating: 5.0


trees have twigs to support their leaves
have flowers to bear flowers
have shade to give shelter
and have hard roots to support the trunk...

flowers have many colors
they make the garden attractive
they feed the bees and butterflies
they make all the insects alive…

see how the rain comes?
it is a cloud forming water
from a distance pouring beyond
a shower from up above...

the rainbow in the sky
brings happiness to my eyes
different hues forming like bridges
mountain to mountain distance is so near...

sun sleeps at night
while moon rests at dawn
west wind blow at dusk
cold breeze waft at morn...

Aphrodite got the golden apple
in exchange to Helen of troy
Menelaus left alone unhappy and sad
when Paris took her to his land...

the Bible has many revelations
the Koran does the same
religions of different races
worship in one Supernatural Being....

see how each other relates the other
from trees to their parts
flowers to insects
objects in the sky
written in the pages of life...

each one needs the other
as other needs each one
see how friendship does
in a life of a large ocean....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 26 November 2009

Well written..excellent set of words used Well said...Maybe you are on the roads of becoming the best, 10ss

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Catrina Heart 27 November 2009

each one needs the other as other needs each one see how friendship does in a life of a large ocean.... ---- interconnected, intertwined... such a lovely comprehensible write meaningful, profound.... the best on your page contents have good sound.... echoing through the doors of our hearts................... 10sssssss

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Sandra Fowler 27 November 2009

'Distance is so near...' an eloquent thought and so very true. A graceful write.10, for you. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Fay Slimm 27 November 2009

The support of a friend is as a tree to it's leaves. - - a good reminder that we are none of us alone with such inspiration from faraway friends....10 from Fay.

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 November 2009

wow..so cool flows with tranquility im so sorry if my comments appears just now... as i was away...far far away.... A very nice write my friend.... Miss you, red lepz... 10++++ for this.. Lovelots, Maia

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Sahar Sahar 07 December 2009

Men are like leafs of trees, sing together with breeze, global peace, love and unity is vital for humanity

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If this became a global manefesto of eart's inhabitans then the world would become a better place. Profound perspective.10/10

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Ravi Sathasivam 02 December 2009

Nice poem with good description. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Akram Awadat 02 December 2009

wow, very good description, i like it a lot big value poem lady grace 10+

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C. P. Sharma 30 November 2009

This is superb poetry, dear. When all diverse things can unite Why among ourselves we fight? The roof and crown of things! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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