My Invisible Garden Poem by Khairul Ahsan

My Invisible Garden

Rating: 5.0


I have a small little garden;
It's not visible but lies hidden,
Deep within my heart's core.
The garden is bedecked with flowers,
Colourful and delightful, all the hours.
Though mundane,they are not mortal,
Once blossomed, they are perennial!

Whenever anybody touches my heart,
With love, affection and kind words,
A flower instantly blossoms in the garden,
Never to die again.
As long as my heart throbs,
The flowers will remain tender,
Each representing a name to remember.


Dhaka
15 September 2020

Tuesday, September 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
All those who love me are as sweet as a flower.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 15 September 2020

that's the garden of love, garden of sympathy, garden of universal unity......

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Valsa George 16 September 2020

Whenever anybody touches my heart, With love, affection and kind words, A flower instantly blossoms in the garden, Never to die again. Our mind becomes a garden when we receive love and consideration from others. Beautiful flowers will then bloom within and unlike the short lived flowers of the garden we keep in our house, these blossoms of joy within us will never wither! A beautiful poem....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 September 2020

A marvelous poem that captures a person with a beautiful heart. When one let flowers bloom in his heart and nurture them forever, he possesses a loving and caring heart. Beautifully and tenderly penned. A great poem. Top Marks

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 November 2020

Hidden! ! Little garden of love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chan Mongol 25 September 2020

A well constructed touchy poem with a wonderful theme, applying love and core values. Herewith, I adore the insightful thought of the honorable poet.

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Sandra Feldman 24 September 2020

It is just too bad that more people cannot feel and participate in what makes poet's glad. How much happier we'd be if we lived more in beauty and fantasy. Than in the violence created by 's evil and its spell. Such a beautiful, inspiring poem. Delicate and idealistic! To be read and remembered in desperate moments, when all seem hopeless. Thank you!

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 September 2020

May the garden flourish with various flowers. May the love reside in your heart till infinity. Nice poem.5***

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2020

Heart is the invisible garden blooming with flowers of love. You have astutely delineated this poem on a metaphor base. I cite....Whenever anybody touches my heart, With love, affection and kind words, A flower instantly blossoms in the garden, What a marvelous poem! It is to my Poems' list.Five stars.

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