teal sky

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~ My Life, Everyday~ - Poem by teal sky

Every day, there are things I say
Every night, there are dreams I play
Every dawn, there in silence I pray
Every dusk, there are fears I fray.

Every path that I walked, life threw bricks
I‘d to suffer stones, kicks and sticks
I'm wounded I know, but their sticks are broken too
No one creates my fate, only I do.

But from start to the end
No matter what I pretend
I reckon I'm headed the right way
Every time, everyday.


Comments about ~ My Life, Everyday~ by teal sky

  • (9/24/2013 11:07:00 AM)


    Your life indeed will be colorful, Successful...A fine read..keep it up... Congrats.. (Report) Reply

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  • Sharad Juneja (4/20/2012 7:17:00 AM)


    really feeling great reading ur work.... class apart..... u rock (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan (4/20/2012 4:51:00 AM)


    whether u think u can or u cannot, u r right.. ' only u can create ur fate
    wow...i liked dat very much.....
    their sticks r broken too dat too is grt.... so u fought back.... grt poem.... best wishes on ur next poem...
    (Report) Reply

  • Ahmed Abomahfouz (4/16/2012 11:36:00 AM)


    awesome poem reflects your high spirit and strong personaloity (Report) Reply

  • Rajendran Muthiah (4/16/2012 8:29:00 AM)


    Hello teenager! What an idea on which you have written this poem! We alone create our fate. Welldone. (Report) Reply

  • Aditi Khandelwal (4/14/2012 3:43:00 AM)


    Really good... and complete with a positive message...
    Aditi
    (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (4/8/2012 10:59:00 PM)


    I'm wounded I know, but their sticks are broken too

    very strong...n beautiful...
    (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (4/8/2012 9:11:00 PM)


    very nice poem, the idea is excellent and the craft is in high class, above a very nice poem i like it...... (Report) Reply

  • (4/6/2012 10:00:00 PM)


    nice to bear in mind, good poem for us (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (4/5/2012 10:43:00 PM)


    Life is woven with sorrow and delight. Your path will be smooth soon..Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (4/4/2012 9:19:00 PM)


    a brilliant poem with a good flow. keep it up. may god bless u (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2012 4:23:00 PM)


    A fantastic flowing poem, really like it.
    A great write.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    Self Destruction.
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, April 27, 2012


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