~ My Life, Everyday~ Poem by teal sky

~ My Life, Everyday~

Rating: 5.0

Every day, there are things I say
Every night, there are dreams I play
Every dawn, there in silence I pray
Every dusk, there are fears I fray.

Every path that I walked, life threw bricks
I‘d to suffer stones, kicks and sticks
I'm wounded I know, but their sticks are broken too
No one creates my fate, only I do.

But from start to the end
No matter what I pretend
I reckon I'm headed the right way
Every time, everyday.

Ramesh Rai 04 April 2012

a brilliant poem with a good flow. keep it up. may god bless u

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Neela Nath Das 05 April 2012

Life is woven with sorrow and delight. Your path will be smooth soon..Wonderful!

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Kee Thampi 06 April 2012

nice to bear in mind, good poem for us

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Wahab Abdul 08 April 2012

very nice poem, the idea is excellent and the craft is in high class, above a very nice poem i like it......

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Shahzia Batool 08 April 2012

I'm wounded I know, but their sticks are broken too very strong...n beautiful...

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Rajkamal P.j 24 September 2013

Your life indeed will be colorful, Successful...A fine read..keep it up... Congrats..

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

really feeling great reading ur work.... class apart..... u rock

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Neetha Sasidharan 20 April 2012

whether u think u can or u cannot, u r right.. ' only u can create ur fate wow...i liked dat very much..... their sticks r broken too dat too is grt.... so u fought back.... grt poem.... best wishes on ur next poem...

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 16 April 2012

awesome poem reflects your high spirit and strong personaloity

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Rajendran Muthiah 16 April 2012

Hello teenager! What an idea on which you have written this poem! We alone create our fate. Welldone.

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