My Life In The Virtual Poem by Bharati Nayak

My Life In The Virtual

Rating: 4.4


I always live in the virtual

For each moment I live

Becomes a past the next moment

Beyond my reach.



I can not go back to the moment passed

Nor can I live in the future

The moments I will live

Can happen in my imagination,

a life of virtual that I can not touch.



The moment of my dream may come or not

But I live in that moment

In that dream

When I build a castle of perfect peace

With garden of stars and moon

With blue gurgling streams and fountains

Lions and tigers behaving as pets

I understand their language

And they understand my language

There is not an iota of violence

There is no killing of animals

No amassing of wealth

In a music filled air

Every one is dancing with joy.



All can get as per their requirements

There are no masters and no servants.]

Because all are friends

Mouse is not killed by cat

And there is perfect harmony

In this beautiful land.'

Sunday, May 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 01 June 2020

A vision of peace...

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Akhtar Jawad 03 June 2020

a beautiful dream of a nice poetess, be it so!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 June 2020

May your dream come true even if these be virtual We all live the moment see my moment also has passed me The world can only live the continuing moment, moment to moment all lapses into a TIME'S MEMORY hopefully with glee let this moment halt a while till poetess you read PPME

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 May 2020

A beautiful poem that depicts leaflets of your life! Extremely well penned......10+++

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Bharati Nayak 01 June 2020

Thank you Dillip for your valuable comment.Much appreciated.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

Many useful and productive things happen in virtual mode.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 September 2022

Yes, something at virtual plane can't be perceived as real but many useful and productive things in virtual platform that's why we embrace digital age humanity.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 September 2020

A well authored piece. Truly marvelous....10++++++

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Glen Kappy 19 July 2020

bharati, thinking more about this poem it struck me that mine entitled " pristine" has similarities. over and over in my poetry i am drawn to explore consciousness and perception. -glen

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Glen Kappy 17 July 2020

hey, bharati! catching up on your latest postings. you identify well the nature of the real in the first two stanzas. you know, of course, that when you summon for me or any reader recognition, that too is real, though, one might say, of a different variety... i share your dream. it makes me think of my poem " imagine me." hoping you are well and thriving, glen

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