My Love Story Poem by Xelam Kan™
My Love Story
Wanna listen my story;
Though attempted by many a time
but its charm has never declined.
A story that will melt your heart
as it is full of melancholic thoughts.
Mind! Not just hear these rhymes
but feel what it reveals onto your heart sublime.
I was blessed
In love with a sweet gentle fairy
Well versed and gracious and best for marry.
As sacred as a holy shrine, but
she was ignorant of a Valentine.
Her rosy lips and dimples' bright
and hazel eyes sparkle like stars at night,
Chasing the sun she all day long
And sung some lovely songs.
Thus passing days, months and years
Full of love, in fun and cheers,
And then turned Heaven His holy writ
distress and bereft
Forlorn as Keats, Romeo and Tess;
The rainbow of my love got eclipsed
Before blossom got buried that lovely bride
Sans HER grace, the world looks dull and dried.
Nothing seems important to me, any more
but to grace my love with her rhymes four.
that will works as a flashback
and do share what you feel....
You are a lover and this is a one love poem. I really liked you changed your style a bit to show that the passion of your love needed something open and different. Again your allusions are to the point, the names of character that make you sad. So come close and open your hearts To dropp down my melancholy thoughts Mind! Not just focus in rhymes Feels what it reveals on to your soul sublime Then the twist in the poem and reference to eclipse The rainbow of my love got eclipse...... This is a powerful line Gulsher..... and the stanza this line belongs to remind of Wallace when his beloved is killed. I solute you dear.
Such an amazing grace, poetic expression in lines...beautiful and beautiful...well done Gulsher! _Soul
oh my god. I got shivers, that was bueatifal and what a twist! so sad in the end but it did not stop how beautifal it was. thank you.
At the onset of this poem, the poet had psycological satisfaction. He was love- motivated in the begining but reclused to delusion at the end. Love could motvate or cause internal disequilibrum. Everyone have this experience this from time to time. Good poem.
First I felt envious of you for your being the writer of this poem! Next I felt proud of you for your being truly a lover of all times. Beneath the stars and the moon on this land of mystery this love has to bloom ever and lovers like you must tell such tales.. A good write Gulsher John.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 10:23:28 PM # 1.0.0
That's what happen to most of the love stories. Very few people in the world have their one true love with them, forever, really moved me, I like the way your poem proceeds, touching rhyme and rythm, you generally Use ancient myth in your poetry but this time you played with Keats, Romeo and Tess, what a talent you are, liked it, toooooo much, Thanks