I opened my eyes in her godly arms
to see the world so fine.
Who gave her all to see me smile,
that's my mother divine.
She took my hand to touch the stars,
and placed them to my feet.
The sky grudged for all this while
and longed for them in desolate.
She held me through my torrid times
and wiped off all my tears.
No fear ever dared to come my way,
as she forced them all to veer.
It is my turn now to pay her back,
all the happiness and love.
For me, she is and will always be
greater than the god above.
nice one indeed...you ve expressed your emotions very well...think that your mom would'v felt ecstatic after reading this one..thanks 10++
I used to be enthralled, as a mother - To hear the same emotions above From my kid who is a teen. The same feelings here, from same clan Makes me hop with thrill. Thanks for all the love from you children. Its a dream come true to have kids like you.
I wished I could'a rated it a ten plus. Great write. God bless us all-MJG.
a true poem coming from a pure heart. you ma is privilaged. shan
A mother is a young child's universe and the adoration and the depth of devotion expressed in this lyric is palpable.
She took my hand to touch the stars, and placed them to my feet. The sky grudged for all this while and longed for them in desolate. great poem and i always rememebr mother divine all the times and it brings tears when i rememebr her....10 read mine...o.mother..mom i miss u...mother and i wept....along with papa do u know and papa u too..complet parent series
well written poem! ! ! god cdn't be everywhere so he made mothers...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mr Pandy Mother is my weakness too as most our fellow society. When you fly thru the clouds, close by the moon and sun thoughts of your mother will diminish all your monotonous. Re. the poem; it is amazingly fine. Thnak you for sharing. Noruddeen