This train is moving
I am on this train
I am moving
I am on this moving train
This train and I are moving
This train moves along with my motion
I move along with this moving train
Train's motion is apparently independent
My motion visibly restricted
This train moves outside my motion
My movement inside its motion
It moves on its tracks
I move on my tracks
Both tracks are differentially parallel
But integrally universal
And interrelated
I get out of this moving train
My motion culminates
This train is moving
I am waiting for the next train…
10th March 2020
They used to be called in the old days TGV in French train et grand vitesse, it had angel wings n lightning speed.
Ah! On the nonstop train of life, always moving with or without us, with different stations to explore and experience. A very well written and meaningful poem!
Lovely allegory on life in this universe. In Sanskrit world/universe is called jagat. It simply means what moves. There is nothing motionless in this world, motions within motions, amidst a chaos of emotions. Well done dear poet.
Moving train! To train your mind with the truth; Moments of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Life is one of motion. Sometimes we move at an accelerated pace, sometimes in a slow motion. Sometimes we stand still, but we cannot stand still for long. Life demands us to keep on moving. A train without movement is of no use. So is human life! Very philosophical!
the poetic mind is moving like moving train hither to thither everywhere no stoppage just a while rest for meeting meeting of best knowledge and again moving moving towards................
A brilliant poem. Very perceptive. Yes, our motion is restricted when we are on a train but it enhances in one way or another our movement. We can go to places we like to see faster by the aid of a train. Wonderfully and cleverly written.10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A meaningful poetic expression. Beautifully crafted...10++++
Thank you Bernard