My Poetry Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

My Poetry

Rating: 5.0


My heart got a blow
But not by any foe
It’s the one I bow
Who made me sow?
The love I don’t know

She said a sweet hello
That made me show
All my lives grow
And even it’s low
Without saying a no

I forgot all my woe
And words of crow
Those made me mow
By my loves bestow
I stared to feel aglow

I made my heart throw
With in one single go
Into a land of snow
Where songs play slow
In a continuous row

I thought so and so
My love will glow
So I danced on toe
Then she said whoa
With expression of oh

It’s my day of below
She said it’s her kind show
And left me in costly owe
That I can’t pay my dear bro
From then my poetry got flow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 14 July 2009

Interesting self analysis poem

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Antonio Liao 14 July 2009

such poem that leads us to know the basic of poetry.....a very practical way of expressing the feeling...clear and sound and understandable to each reader... worth to keep in the public and private library for who want to know the basic of poetry....thank for sharing.....a 10 +

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Louis Rams 14 July 2009

YOUR POETRY IS SLOW, THIS MUCH WE KNOW BUT IT'S GOT A GREAT FLOW. GR8T WRITE A TEN

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Janell Cressman 20 July 2009

very nicely done! ! ! ! i like the flow and the rhyme AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 July 2009

Quite a good rhyme and rhythm. Refreshingly good. Kudos.

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Eyan Desir 15 July 2009

Good rhymes........good write

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Catrina Heart 15 July 2009

Flowing words so continously in vividness and fine rhymes too...10

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Surya . 14 July 2009

great flow. i belive there is a lover in you whose thirst is yet to be quenched.great rhyming as usual. voted10 surya

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