~ My Precious Time ~ - Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ My Precious Time ~
Ms. Nivedita
July 1,2010

Time is best healer
Time is best killer
Time is best sharpener
Time is best blunter
Time repeats
Time completes.

Sorry time
I’ve no time
To give you
My precious time!

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Comments about ~ My Precious Time ~ by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

  • (4/21/2011 5:08:00 PM)

    A bit unusual in Style but really got your point across, nice one! As they say, good things come in small measures! (Report) Reply

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  • (10/5/2010 11:23:00 PM)

    What a wonderful wordplay with such great meaning and in end time is denied by you not having time for time itself Your Precious Time love it. (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2010 4:54:00 PM)

    Front and center. Best case against time...'i have no time to give you my time' very creative and written with such great disposition. totally enjoyed (Report) Reply

  • (8/2/2010 10:16:00 AM)

    A deep little poem. Makes one contemplate! They say time is of the essence! Enjoyed read! ; D (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (7/14/2010 7:25:00 PM)

    Time and tide waits for no man. Procrastination is thief of time. Time is the essence of any contract. Catch time by the forelock. Time alone will set right things. One should be time conscious. Timetable. Measure time. Keep time. Life time achievement. How many times I can tell you about this time? It is your good time that everyone appreciate your wonderful work. (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2010 1:46:00 PM)

    Timing is the cause of many of life truamatic events. (Report) Reply

  • Emma Adamyan (7/14/2010 3:39:00 AM)

    Brief, but full of deep thoughts. I liked (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2010 9:27:00 AM)

    It is said “ Genius is one percent inspiration and ninetynine percent perspiration” and every genius has turned out by proper utilization of time, as you say, time is the best sharpener.Many talents also just go waste as they don’t fruitfully get utilized in appropriate time frame, as mentioned in your poem, time is the best blunter.Precious thought expressed in lucid and tacit manner. Earlier I used to take classes of time management (though personally I am a poor time manager) , if I had seen this poem then I would have used in my class, acknowledging the poet.

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  • (7/13/2010 6:47:00 AM)

    Each second is unique.

    When Time spent, it'll never come back like the spoken word, the thrown arrow and the lost chance. Time is precious, sure, because it's unique and I love such uniqueness. In fact we all live just a long day which finishes by a seperation moment, the moment of DEATH (our common destination) . Nivedita I've enjoyed reading your poem.

    ThanksForSharing :)
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  • C N Prem Kumar (7/13/2010 4:00:00 AM)

    Time, the ever changing reality which changes everything, gets a poetic expression through this poem. (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2010 12:01:00 AM)

    It resembles to the poem 'Ring out, wild bells' written by Lord Tennyson. Yes time is precious, and we should move ahead trusting the mighty time without an iota of doubt.
    Very nicely composed.10+++
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  • (7/11/2010 12:16:00 PM)

    when you don't have time for time so save some time so that you can save time......nice've wasted your time reading my opinion because you know it i think=)
    thanks for sharing
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  • (7/11/2010 3:27:00 AM)

    Time I feel you will be pulled back to write upon this theme again and again
    reminds of what I was expressing in 'The Mind Killer', 'Karma Of Destinies Spoken', 'Sung Melody Your Life? ' and 'Time Huntress Dancing' etc. I look forward to reading your many future poems of time.
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  • Varanasi Ramabrahmam (7/10/2010 11:53:00 PM)

    A very cute and simple verse about Time. But Time is only a notion. The reality is movement, change or becoming is mistaken as Time and Passage of Time. (Report) Reply

  • Varanasi Ramabrahmam (7/10/2010 11:53:00 PM)

    A very cute and simple verse about Time. But Time is only a notion. The reality is movement, change or becoming is mistaken as Time and Passage of Time. (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses (7/9/2010 11:06:00 PM)

    the sharpest poem for time and the way you expressing yourself about time is really good! !
    This is a poem which stand on human against time and what can i say.... this is excellent poem which i believe ever reader get your point after the last period.
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  • (7/9/2010 7:12:00 PM)

    Sounds like you are upset with the time for its constant and merciless passing...
    Time is the puzzle of centuries... I'm not sure if we'll ever find the way to stop it...
    Cute, little write :)
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  • (7/6/2010 1:47:00 PM)

    Sorry time
    I’ve no time
    To give you
    My precious time!

    kind of funny and meaningful at the same time....telling time 'i have no time for you' n naming it precious! ...reveals your pride, confidence, faith...your value for time and again snap back at time at the end of all 'sorry time i have no time'....a drama of timeless understanding, acceptance..denial...
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  • (7/5/2010 3:05:00 PM)

    Poem of great understanding...time heals, time kills, et al... a continuum, nonreversal in which many events occur. Thus, time waits for no one. a 10+++ for this poem of great wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • (7/2/2010 11:52:00 AM)

    Word and conceptual .wizardry…with pinch of satire….beautiful timing of ending…a clean tenner…
    Thanks Poet for such a nice poem
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 30, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 30, 2010

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