~ My Precious Time ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
July 1,2010
Time is best healer
Time is best killer
Time is best sharpener
Time is best blunter
Time repeats
Time completes.
Sorry time
I’ve no time
To give you
My precious time!
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A very cute and simple verse about Time. But Time is only a notion. The reality is movement, change or becoming is mistaken as Time and Passage of Time.
A very cute and simple verse about Time. But Time is only a notion. The reality is movement, change or becoming is mistaken as Time and Passage of Time.
Time I feel you will be pulled back to write upon this theme again and again reminds of what I was expressing in 'The Mind Killer', 'Karma Of Destinies Spoken', 'Sung Melody Your Life? ' and 'Time Huntress Dancing' etc. I look forward to reading your many future poems of time.
when you don't have time for time so save some time so that you can save time......nice verses...you've wasted your time reading my opinion because you know it i think=) thanks for sharing
A bit unusual in Style but really got your point across, nice one! As they say, good things come in small measures!
What a wonderful wordplay with such great meaning and in end time is denied by you not having time for time itself Your Precious Time love it.
Front and center. Best case against time...'i have no time to give you my time' very creative and written with such great disposition. totally enjoyed
A deep little poem. Makes one contemplate! They say time is of the essence! Enjoyed read! ; D
Time and tide waits for no man. Procrastination is thief of time. Time is the essence of any contract. Catch time by the forelock. Time alone will set right things. One should be time conscious. Timetable. Measure time. Keep time. Life time achievement. How many times I can tell you about this time? It is your good time that everyone appreciate your wonderful work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the sharpest poem for time and the way you expressing yourself about time is really good! ! This is a poem which stand on human against time and what can i say.... this is excellent poem which i believe ever reader get your point after the last period. 10/10