My Revenge Poem by Sathya Narayana

My Revenge

Rating: 4.9


I too like to take revenge
on those who hated me,
badly treated me,
berated me
and grated
my tender feelings cruelly.

I keep my weapons ready,
for accidental accost, if any
to confront them...
yes...with open arms,
glowing smile,
gracious visage
and lastly
with a heartfelt embrace!

My revenge is now complete...
the enemy yielded
with an embarassed face
and heart throttling guilt
accepting his total defeat!

Wednesday, December 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: revenge
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A beautiful poem. u get 10++.............

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Aijaz Asif 08 December 2008

another great write with very wise thought bhayya and the weapon you used, is the best weapon ever made...thanks 10++++++ A+++ rgds asif

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Ian Singer 08 December 2008

a very good poem very good

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Sandra Fowler 07 December 2008

An excellent way to take revenge. Very Biblical, actually. If this example was followed, there would indeed be peace on earth. I like this poem very much.10 without hesitation. warm regards, Sandra

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Allan Macli Borges 07 December 2008

only from acts of love can rise times of peace... beautiful words!

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Merna Ibrahim 18 October 2009

Remarkable title to a strong poem! ! I hope you visit my section...thanks. Merna.

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Raja Basu 07 February 2009

The poem reflects two features - a.) Your poetic skills, and b.) Your marvelous philosophy of life. Wish everybody could have thought in your way.

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Meena Iyer 16 December 2008

Ah a gentle revenge! effective never the less

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Min Sia 15 December 2008

Very great poem..of hatred into forgiveness.. Amazingly..words flowing clearly..river of emotions..inspiration..and heartwarming interpretation... Thank for sharing this wonderful poem..You're truly a great poet!

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Neelabha Mahajan 15 December 2008

Really great poem.You have described FORGIVENESS in a very beautiful manner. HATS OFF............ With regards Neelabha

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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