I am 55 and a little crazy,
If I stand up to fast things become a little hazy.
I need another line,
I am really in a bind.
So early in my rhyme,
I've really messed up this time.
Hey this is kinda fun,
Reminds me of good old days in the sun.
This time I have really lost my wits,
Man this surly is the pits.
Some day I'll get this down,
Or Saint will take me to the pound.
With blue juice he'll say,
Baby you just couldn’t rhyme so this is your day,
The day I do this often,
Is the day I lay in my coffin.
I hope all of this rhyme’s,
Because GOD knows I have tried 100 times.
I think I might have been a tard,
My first rhyming poem really wasn’t that hard.
(this goes to all my friends and readers on here to show you I really cant rhyme but this was fun maybe I will do it again I said maybe Saint Maybe lol... I Love you guys)
Hey good job for the first try, or second, or third, ...good job.
You have done very well. May be the second line needs little overhaul. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ahhh! You know Cynosure helped me to learn to control my rhymes as well. But I am sure the education you are getting is far more deeper than mine. ; 0) LOL! (Just so kidding with you.) This was a wonderful piece and your rhyme was completely superb. Seriously I think you did a great job. Your thoughts are clear and this poem is fun. Take Care, Stacey