My Scattered Thoughts Iv Poem by Shahzia Batool

My Scattered Thoughts Iv

Rating: 4.3


The journey of life
is spanning o'er centuries
even then everyman has to submit himself
to his final end...

My God!
carrying the loads
of unfulfilled aspirations,
where to go leaving your altar...

wishing to receive the happy tidings
of the one reaching home safely
before the sun lying down
into the grave of evening...

Time is but a flowing stream,
never stopping anywhere, but a moment will come
when it will be falling into the ocean
of timeless eternity...

How cute the world of dreams are,
unless you open your eyes; a humble supplication
don't stay attached to me, for i don't wish to see you
in regrets, for carrying the gifts of hopes in hands
i'll be back to my home...
i wish to do all left undone by the rest...
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is anything impossible in the world?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 10 April 2013

Time is but a flowing stream, never stopping anywhere, but a moment will come when it will be falling into the ocean of timeless eternity.. . Beautiful! ! I love these lines! ! So beautiful! Love this great write! !

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Yasmin Khan 10 April 2013

We all carry the 'load of unfulfilled aspirations' but the aspirations and dreams are the very essence of our being.

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Abhishek Tiwari 11 April 2013

Thats was realistic! ! And what a beautiful way too connect it with the mother nature

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Frank James Davis 11 April 2013

Brave, insightful thinking artistically expressed. Excellent, Shahzia!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 April 2013

nothing is impossible in the world, if we have the desire...inspirational..

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Muhammad Ali 25 January 2014

aapi, if i can aproach, Everything is not impossible, means every bad thing is possible! ... We are human. I think is not it good! ... And in ideal life (if it matters in real life, not just in the books or Books) , conditions are bad when we are moving on the bad side and He is not happy from us. ... A human should always be good with others. (should always be good with himself too. p.a.i.n.f.u.l. but not always) . best wishes. and nice poem.

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Ruth Walters 30 April 2013

How cute the world of dreams are, unless you open your eyes my sentiments as when the world is just to hard to take I hide within my dreams.......

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Tribhawan Kaul 21 April 2013

A very beautiful poem. Last stanza is inspirational and gives hope even though one feels detached to the journey of life taking its own course. :)

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Tribhawan Kaul 21 April 2013

It is a beautifully written poem. Last stanza is inspirational and gives hope even though one feels detached with the life's journey taking its own course.

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Anjali Sinha 20 April 2013

Lovely- Inspirational poem! ! ! ! ! . Nothing is impossible in this world- dear Shazia- - one just requires grit and determination. Great write. Keep writing- enjoyed it.

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