Reshma Ramesh

Rookie - 56 Points (20th April / Bangalore, India)

My Sweet Glance - Poem by Reshma Ramesh

When your tears flow on my cheek,
Wet and salty, they grow
Fond of your skin so warm, our love
Like the smell of incense
Spreads from house to house in the wind,
Like the song of our passion,
My name you have written in every line,
Our love penned in gold
When you hold my hand for your lips
To kiss, I hold yours to my
Eyes and my heart for you to feel the cries
The blood laced sword you place
At my feet, Oh! Conqueror of the world,
I will place in your hands,
The sword will turn into a rose red so deep and
Then it will turn into a dove
Which flies away as we watch hand in hand

In sequel to poem cruel glance by poet Sadiqullah Khan
(Thank you Sadiq for bringing out this is in me)


Comments about My Sweet Glance by Reshma Ramesh

  • Marilyn LottMarilyn Lott (10/19/2008 9:14:00 PM)

    A very warm sweet love story. Well done! Keep writing and sharing. A '10! '

    Best Wishes,
    Marilyn
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  • Paul Barnacle (10/19/2008 2:12:00 PM)

    Hi Reshma, after reading the other comments on this poem I feel like a voyeur looking in on a mutual admiration society, the piece was 'Shakespearean', but I found it rather passionless, a speech of acquiescence and measured metre.I think the dove was inner spirit leaving. (Report)Reply

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  • Howard Johnson (10/14/2008 4:33:00 PM)

    Thank you for bringing this quality write to my attention, Reshma, A true reading experance. (Report)Reply

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  • Vidyadhar DurgekarVidyadhar Durgekar (10/14/2008 12:34:00 PM)

    Then it will turn into a dove
    Which flies away as we watch hand in hand
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  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/14/2008 6:23:00 AM)

    Hats off to your imagination....A sword becoming a red rose and then into a dove...it is terrific..........as beautiful as u are..........10000000000000 (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (10/13/2008 8:18:00 AM)

    well...good romantic poetic dialogue between you and Sadiq, Reshma...i think this is hotting up...the poems are getting warmer and warmer...once again a good expressive write where lines retain poetic beauty...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/11/2008 5:21:00 AM)

    Owe, , , , , , , reshma, , , you are such a complement, , , , , , , , , , , , i am rather embarassed, , u know, , , (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/11/2008 1:02:00 AM)

    yes seema you should he is one of the most talented person i have ever met (Report)Reply

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  • Seema Aarella (10/11/2008 12:52:00 AM)

    enjoyed your thoughts.....got to see what sadiq had written! (Report)Reply

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/11/2008 12:41:00 AM)

    You enjoy seeing others 'smouldering' by your love, , , I saw a dream last night, ,10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Thad Wilk (10/10/2008 9:49:00 AM)

    A lovely and touching poem i would say, eloquently expressed - in your own unique way!
    splendid read reshma! *10plus*!
    Friend Thad
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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (10/10/2008 8:45:00 AM)

    The sequels are like acts in a Shakeperean play, , , , timeless conversations in poetry, , , deeply emotional, , Reshma you are truly talented, ,10 and much much more from me, , loved reading it, , (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 21, 2008


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