MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ My Thee My Thou ~

Love Echoes Love Echoes
In Euphony In Symphony
In vast Universe
In Milky Way.

Unshackled tune swings
Buoyancy in me clings.

Quest the Echo
Fathom the Echo.

Cataclysm of immortality
In the abode of eternity.

Lo:
I find my fond
My Thee My Thou
In love soaked Euphony
In love soaked Symphony.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 30, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, January 27, 2012

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (4/19/2015 6:17:00 AM)

    Powerful piece on love, well articulated and nicely penned in poetic diction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (12/15/2014 6:43:00 PM)

    Short sweet and mesmerizing. Enjoyed the read.10

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  • Ken E Hall (1/10/2011 3:48:00 AM)

    Like singing in the rain of the universe when thou hast thine thee with glee...luvli..
    universal poetry 10/10...regards

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  • Arshad Khan (11/5/2010 1:29:00 AM)

    Awesome! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! No words to express my feelings.You are God's gift. Happy Diwali to you and your family.

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  • Bert BellBert Bell (11/3/2010 8:38:00 AM)

    This is a wonderful poem. I don't know why people are giving you slow votes. I give 10/10 and more if I could. This is real poetry and it's very good.

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (11/2/2010 11:45:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem. While reading I was lost somewhere in the never ending feelings of love. Nivedita your are really innovative in your compostion. I really liked the poem very much.

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  • Jenny Gordon (10/20/2010 9:18:00 PM)

    Oh, let me see...it echoes Tagore, indeed!
    You are blissfully in love w/your eternal loving lord.
    Great job! ! ! !
    I enjoyed it!

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  • Miroslava OdalovicMiroslava Odalovic (10/15/2010 9:06:00 AM)

    Very inspired/ing guess love the only way to really say Thou.

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  • Nathanial Jones (8/27/2010 5:39:00 PM)

    thou canst makest music analogously to my ears. Good times

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  • David Beckham (8/5/2010 4:56:00 PM)

    Hod on tight to what you have both literally and figuratively. You have come to shine. Love echoes love echoes. enjoyed

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 7:47:00 AM)

    Lo:
    I find my fond
    My Thee My Thou
    In love soaked Euphony
    In love soaked Symphony..... where there is love there is God. you may find in every small particles and u need not bother about it.t is for asking and you may love to be loved if offered love.... vey nice wy of putting it.....10

    read mine....minutes away.. thiught for self

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  • Afzal Shauq (5/29/2010 11:35:00 PM)

    I find my fond
    My Thee My Thou
    In love soaked Euphony
    In love soaked Symphony.

    extreme and dapth of love is part of this poem.. awesome and quite interesting one.. liked it

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  • Shanti Gloss Bagchi Glitter (5/29/2010 1:18:00 PM)

    ‘Cataclysm of immortality/In the abode of eternity.’

    Wow!

    Immersed in ocean of eternity. Flood of delight


    ‘I find my fond
    My Thee My Thou
    In love soaked Euphony
    In love soaked Symphony.’

    Euphony and Symphony soaked in Love indeed excellent.15
    10++

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  • Pranab K ChakrabortyPranab K Chakraborty (5/16/2010 2:01:00 PM)

    It is really an irony. Poet also hears the love everywhere, and we the worthless creatures simply hankering love to get with the touch in lips, palms etc. So great is the poet. Her soul is so rectified to be united with the universe. Nothing is ugly on the earth except the readers who are not ready to tune with her same chord.
    Good writing as a surrendering song which could be sang in a temple. But our hearing is burdened with the cacophony of our low living surroundings where hunger is the first and foremost wanting. Yet the poet's thee and thou is no doubt very romantic and surrealistic in nature where at least the sinking glory we can imagine to reach.

    Poet please touch with your realised soul as we can sometimes feel that really love blows in the wind as the highest philosophical wisdom man have acquired on the Earth.

    10+++
    Apoet

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  • Bachha Chakravorty (4/19/2010 2:22:00 PM)

    ‘Lo:
    I find my fond
    My Thee My Thou
    In love soaked Euphony
    In love soaked Symphony.’

    Finest conclusive lines I’ve ever read

    This is great poem to levitate psyche into Love and Love and Lovefull Congrat
    10++

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (2/20/2010 1:44:00 PM)

    I loved this one! deep in term of meaning and sweet in term of structure...
    there is such a Harmony between your Euphony and your Symphony...

    your THEE your THOU deserves 10.

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  • Carol Gall (1/14/2010 5:08:00 AM)

    beautiful niv like your heart 10

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  • Dom N. Kafley (1/11/2010 2:51:00 AM)

    What an in-depth thought and imagination! I love reading it...blessed you are.

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (1/9/2010 2:25:00 PM)

    Love Echoes are like no other sound waves. O' how delightful 'Love Echoes in euphony and Symphony and your well chosen words just chime in as well. Great job! ! a 10+++

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  • Vinod KumarVinod Kumar (1/2/2010 8:23:00 AM)

    Art of Living with the symphony of love great lines,10+

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