Mystery Location 1 (Mystery Lake) Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Mystery Location 1 (Mystery Lake)

Rating: 4.2


A marvelous lake I have found
When nobody else was around.
Fulfilling my own deepest wish,
It's just overflowing with fish.

Its natural beauty abounds;
A mystic enchantment surrounds.
Do you think of yourself as a whiz?
Can you say where this lovely lake is?

Mystery Location 1 (Mystery Lake)
Sunday, November 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lake,lakes,nature,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is not a contest. There is no prize for identifying this lake, just the satisfaction and 'glory' of doing so.

written 05 November 2016
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 07 November 2016

Don't know where it is, but the way things are now, would love to run there, nothing around, no one there, not a sound. Peace at last! Fascination cast. Beautiful!

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Grace Jessen 01 May 2018

Are you going to reveal this lake for us now?

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Kim Barney 02 May 2018

It is done. Click next poem.

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Grace Jessen 04 August 2017

Judging by the surrounding countryside, I will guess Lake Mead.

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Kim Barney 04 August 2017

Lake Mead is in Nevada, but this lake is not found within the state of Nevada. Good guess, however. The States of Nevada, New York, and Utah have now been eliminated.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 11 November 2016

thought provoking lines like a quiz, good rhyme, keep sharing dear poet

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Spock The Vegan 10 November 2016

Knowing that you are from Utah, I will guess Utah Lake. I have been to Fish Lake in Utah, but not very familiar with it, so that would be my second guess.

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Kim Barney 10 November 2016

Thank you for guessing, but this lake is not found anywhere within the state of Utah. I WILL tell you that it IS located somewhere in the United States of America, however. Tom has eliminated New York and you have eliminated Utah.

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Tom Billsborough 08 November 2016

Go on, Kim. I'll have a guess. One of the Finger lakes in Northern NY State? it looks a very restful spot. A very fine poem.

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Kim Barney 08 November 2016

Tom, thanks for your guess, but this lake is not found anywhere within the state of New York.

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