Name Plate Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Name Plate

Rating: 4.6


it is necessary to tell my story
life is when held in it
as moments flecks away
like waves devouring all earthly
do you ever mean condescending?

all these by demeanor of benevolence
sun may commit no wrong diffusing
the light and warmth together
have you ever seen the top of universe?

by the heath of Himalayas heart
snow may feel strength in divine
have we ever measure the angle
between curve of desire and craving?

do we ever know angry decibels of thunder?
that may burn the earth as half backed bone
moon yet knows the curve of meaning blue
twilight when hanging in the shadow of love

and I do remember the gleams of night
embracing the memoirs of time assailed
by the terraced valley of the sultry rune
heart chilled under pine of falling snow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Kumar 11 July 2010

Say everything keeping under the cool situation, nice narration thanks,10+

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Priyambada Chatterjee 05 June 2010

heart chilled under pine of falling snow ....loved your way of thinking.

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Cailin O'Malley 19 May 2010

Love it! So glad I was able to experience the words that contain such depth.

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Sumita Datta 11 March 2010

I liked this piece of work too.. It's so natural... :)

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Sahar Sahar 14 February 2010

you described the universal relations of our life with nature so beautifully that i am speechless......i adore your beautiful style.....your words are sparkly and shined in the horizons of poetry

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Rachel Butler 18 July 2015

I think this was a confusing time of thought's and feeling which never held the nub of the feeling carried away in the thought.

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Luwi Habte 05 November 2010

Ofcourse it is nessesary, if you have such a deep meaning stoy, it is really amazing Dr, i do love this well penned for real,

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Romeo Della Valle 29 August 2010

Wisdom leaves its traces behind in every poem or song that is written every day! You have successfully proven that you are one of those, DR., keep them coming! 10+++ in this master piece! God Bless You! Love and Peace...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 July 2010

‘do we ever know angry decibels of thunder? that may burn the earth as half backed bone moon yet knows the curve of meaning blue twilight when hanging in the shadow of love’ ~ metaphor majestic…but anger is just short of one alphabet ‘A’…to culminate in danger…lol… Yeah so much honeymooning done...moon lost luster brilliancy and becoming BLUE…still romancer prefer word Moon so love will lingeringly hang for ever… even in silhouette and shadow… thanks for sharing … Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Binoy Barman 11 July 2010

I liked the poem. It is enjoyable to read. I especially loved these two lines: 'moon yet knows the curve of meaning blue twilight when hanging in the shadow of love'

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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