Nature's Way! ! Poem by Siddartha Montik

Nature's Way! !

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Student Camp on its tour of Nature,
walking along a coast in their leisure.

remembering the Nature's wonders in many,
comparing to the lessons they had in botany.

crossing by a turtle nest almost camouflaged,
amused, a student, looking at a baby lone and stranded.

not heeding to the words of the leader,
went on helping the baby turtle to the water.

group walked ahead, feeling happy for the deed,
only to turn back to the loud cry of gulls behind!

scores of babies running berserk on their way,
getting picked by the gulls as easy prey.

is all for nobody's guess, what went wrong,
that, 'the baby acting only as a watch-dog! '
its move, signal for the siblings in wait,
'its all safe and good now, right time to go wet.'

simple mechanism so built-in, its all in 'Nature's way',
let's not meddle-in, better we stay away.

copyright © Siddartha Montik (Ramesh Kompella)

Nature's Way! !
Tuesday, August 30, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 05 August 2017

Nature has its own way to protect its inhabitants! Animals and birds can take care of themselves... It is better that human beings don't intervene! However the camp in Nature's lap must have been an exciting experience!

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Rajendran Muthiah 04 November 2016

The lines are condensed omitting the auxiliary verbs except in line 11 where 'is' is used as a separate syllable. All the living things/beings have their own ways of spying to protect themselves from the predators. Sun-bath taking turtles, sending their watch-dog/sentinel to see the dangers, waiting for the signal to get into the sea, like a great poet, the poet has revealed the truth that there is in-built mechanism in every being to live in this harsh world. Some of the lines are alliterative. There are no perfect rhymes at ends of lines but the poet has given as far as possible close rhyming words. A great poet is in the offing!

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Tom Billsborough 03 November 2016

A good lesson learnt. Let us not interfere with Nature's wisdom. Yes, I really like this poem. It had much wider implications using a clear image.

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Arnab Kumar Roy 23 October 2017

Nature: Savior or Slayer? ?

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Siddartha Montik 02 April 2018

Nature.. a Perfect 'Balancer'! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 August 2019

Let nature’s way do its task..... Significant poem, sir Siddartha..10+++

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Safiyyah Manjra 18 September 2018

Made me think about life, but sadly, not in a positive light.

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Ruta Mohapatra 10 June 2018

A good message! One must understand nature's ways.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 06 March 2018

A lovely poem with a good moral too, not to meddle up in natures way.

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Sada Bihari Sahu 26 February 2018

Beautifully penned. simple mechanism so built-in, its all in 'Nature's way', let's not meddle-in, better we stay away. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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