Never Feed Your Body With The Dead Soul Poem by Abdul Wahab

Never Feed Your Body With The Dead Soul

Rating: 4.4


If dreams break even in a dream
Yet you get hurt in your heart
The body is lying like a log
The soul is dead in frosty fog

So dare to dream in a dream
As the soul searches life
The life searches dream
The dream is the cream of life.
let the dream to break down never
Rather get it move like a super car
Stretch it like a synthetic rubber
Make sure that the soul is never dead
And the body is never dead soul fed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 04 March 2012

let your dreams be breath, let your breath be shared! good one!

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Patricia Green 04 March 2012

That is really good i love it

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

wonderful.So never let the dream to break down - - i love it, great poem. thanks :)

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Shahzia Batool 05 March 2012

This poem is composed very thoughtfully...alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhythm, beat...all worked out well...

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Njuguna Peter Mnyagia 06 March 2012

It's great n the art got me captivated. Good work

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Primrose Tee 05 May 2014

dare to dream in a dream..great

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 13 June 2012

Such is the trick; to harness the power of dream_ and feed life of its every speck_ lest it turns an ashen lark... Thumbs up.

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Nana Kwame Nketsiah 18 March 2012

Great work,100 thumb up for you.

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Michael Williams 18 March 2012

Yes dream within a dream my friend.

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Rony Sk 16 March 2012

It is a very good poem. I like it very much.

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