Abdul Wahab

Never Feed Your Body With The Dead Soul - Poem by Abdul Wahab

If dreams break even in a dream
Yet you get hurt in your heart
The body is lying like a log
The soul is dead in frosty fog

So dare to dream in a dream
As the soul searches life
The life searches dream
The dream is the cream of life.
let the dream to break down never
Rather get it move like a super car
Stretch it like a synthetic rubber
Make sure that the soul is never dead
And the body is never dead soul fed.

Comments about Never Feed Your Body With The Dead Soul by Abdul Wahab

  • Primrose Tee (5/5/2014 7:14:00 AM)

    dare to dream in a dream..great (Report) Reply

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  • Oludipe Oyin Samuel (6/13/2012 6:03:00 AM)

    Such is the trick; to harness the power of dream_ and feed life of its every speck_ lest it turns an ashen lark... Thumbs up. (Report) Reply

  • Samuel Donkor (3/18/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    Great work,100 thumb up for you. (Report) Reply

  • Michael Williams (3/18/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    Yes dream within a dream my friend. (Report) Reply

  • (3/16/2012 12:24:00 AM)

    It is a very good poem. I like it very much. (Report) Reply

  • (3/14/2012 2:45:00 PM)

    i waz reading on my 4ne, and i was mad dat it had to end, left me begn 4 mo, nyc writing... (Report) Reply

  • (3/11/2012 12:58:00 PM)

    The poem is short but very sweet with beautiful meaning. i think the poem should be as popular as '' dreams'' written by LANGSTON HUGHES. (Report) Reply

  • (3/7/2012 11:40:00 PM)

    Abdul your poem is fabulous and outstanding.It's got everything! But most of all...it is a magnificent work of art! (Report) Reply

  • (3/7/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    With many lines line these ye, a poet you hit my heart again and again with alliteration and rhythm. An en-captivating and soul stirring poem by you, oh friend Wahabji!

    Make sure that the soul is never dead
    And the body is never dead soul fed.
    (Report) Reply

  • Njuguna Peter Mnyagia (3/6/2012 4:04:00 AM)

    It's great n the art got me captivated. Good work (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (3/5/2012 8:25:00 AM)

    This poem is composed very thoughtfully...alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhythm, beat...all worked out well... (Report) Reply

  • Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/5/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    wonderful.So never let the dream to break down - - i love it, great poem. thanks :) (Report) Reply

  • (3/4/2012 7:06:00 PM)

    That is really good i love it (Report) Reply

  • (3/4/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    let your dreams be breath, let your breath be shared! good one! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 17, 2012

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