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Never Feed Your Body With The Dead Soul

Rating: 4.4

If dreams break even in a dream
Yet you get hurt in your heart
The body is lying like a log
The soul is dead in frosty fog

So dare to dream in a dream
As the soul searches life
The life searches dream
The dream is the cream of life.
let the dream to break down never

Rather get it move like a super car
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Lusekelo Simwela 14 March 2012

i waz reading on my 4ne, and i was mad dat it had to end, left me begn 4 mo, nyc writing...

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Salema Khatun 11 March 2012

The poem is short but very sweet with beautiful meaning. i think the poem should be as popular as '' dreams'' written by LANGSTON HUGHES.

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Pheko Motaung 07 March 2012

Abdul your poem is fabulous and outstanding.It's got everything! But most of all...it is a magnificent work of art!

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Harindhar Reddy 07 March 2012

With many lines line these ye, a poet you hit my heart again and again with alliteration and rhythm. An en-captivating and soul stirring poem by you, oh friend Wahabji! Make sure that the soul is never dead And the body is never dead soul fed.

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Njuguna Peter Mnyagia 06 March 2012

It's great n the art got me captivated. Good work

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Primrose Tee 05 May 2014

dare to dream in a dream..great

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 13 June 2012

Such is the trick; to harness the power of dream_ and feed life of its every speck_ lest it turns an ashen lark... Thumbs up.

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Nana Kwame Nketsiah 18 March 2012

Great work,100 thumb up for you.

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Michael Williams 18 March 2012

Yes dream within a dream my friend.

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Rony Sk 16 March 2012

It is a very good poem. I like it very much.

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