Your feelings are recycled,
Maybe many times used,
an echo repeated anew.
My love too...
We often dream
of freshness of new love,
of pure emotions:
of very first issue.
In moments of wild passion
Mother Nature gives a clue…
Offspring, baby, new issue!
This wonderful work deftly addresses the complications of life itself.....every act...every move is in some way intricately entwined with the other! An extraordinary composition my friend.
What an interesting proposition - recycled feelings. I like it - and the poem inspired by the notion. To me feelings infinitely recyclable. They are expressions of life shimmering inside the heart which are always there - be they fanned by passion or terror, or left to flicker. An interesting poem about advaita (non duality) methinks. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Onelia, A lovely message in it. Life is permanently under construction. Love dies! ! ! it revives, new issue! ! ! new relation, new birth! ! ! new hopes, frustration! ! ! reunion, dip and dive! ! ! new depths strive. CP
A delicate play on 'issue' with 'birth' renewal implications. But the poem is so much deeper... Issue is an end-point to a process worth thinking about! Subtle... Rgds, Ivan
Onelia there is such a clever and yet simple message therein. You poem reminds me of a poem by a poet called Brian Patten, the poem name is 'It is time to tidy up your life'. Your poem mentions mother nature gives us a clue, sometimes I think it's our soul that gives us a clue also. A very lovely poem with multi-layers. HG: -) xx
We often dream of freshness of new love... new offspring.... it is so splendid a thougt a passionate write and I think I should have read this much before.. 10 for this Onelia.. Rgs Rema
recycled feeling or a second-hand heart :) a very good poem...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fresh and full of love...but hey..that's just you! love Donall Donall