Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

New Scene - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

New scene

When rain god is pleased
New energy is released
Earth wears new outlook
That shall be better than any scene of the book

Especially rain creates typical position
For mother bird it is confusion
How to feed new born
When water is flown alarmingly

Still she prefers to face
And make access
For food to child bird
With shouting word

Nature has given
Strength to even
Weakest person during crisis
The struggle still persists

Mother becomes bold
And bring food
Serves to new born
And create new scene

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Comments about New Scene by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (11/22/2016 10:24:00 PM)


    Heartiest Congrats on the member POTD for this beautifully conceived meaningful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/22/2016 10:07:00 PM)


    I know you are extremely prolific. But, why don't you go to a grammar school? (Report) Reply

  • B.m. Biswas (11/22/2016 8:54:00 PM)

    METAPHOR
    how all the mothers struggle or become obsessed of of their children is metaphorically drawn....

    congrats.
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  • Seamus O' Brian (11/22/2016 11:27:00 AM)


    So many everyday occurrences are in reality amazingly beautiful miracles. Thank you for this reminder, to look anew at the wonder that surrounds us everywhere!
    NB
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  • Clarence Prince (11/22/2016 8:40:00 AM)


    A truly beautiful poem and scene!
    Thanks for sharing!
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  • Ramesh T A (11/22/2016 7:55:00 AM)

    Bird's Life
    Bird's life in Nature is wonderful as its survival is helped by Nature in a unique way. This fact is well said in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Indira Renganathan (11/22/2016 7:54:00 AM)


    Yes, even in hard moments of rain pour birds do dare to search for food for their chicks....nature has a special
    corner in her heart for them...nice poem for a nice photo- -congratulations for the poet of the day Hasmukh- -10++++
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (11/22/2016 3:47:00 AM)


    Verily, the mother bird becomes bold even under such circumstances and serves
    It's duty
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  • (11/22/2016 2:12:00 AM)


    nice photograph. Poem of the Day. Amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (11/22/2016 1:29:00 AM)


    Still she prefers to face
    And make access
    For food to child bird
    With shouting word
    - - - - - - - - - - Mother fights every odd to feed her children and this instinct is found in all the species of living kingdom.
    Congratulations for Poem of the Day..
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (11/22/2016 1:13:00 AM)


    Still she prefers to face
    And make access
    For food to child bird
    With shouting word

    Nice poem... Congrats for being selected for the day....
    (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/22/2016 12:30:00 AM)

    Mother
    Caring. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (11/22/2016 12:17:00 AM)

    New Scene
    Mothers are resourceful and will do anything for their children.
    Congratulations for having this selected as poem of the day!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/1/2016 4:51:00 AM)


    Mother becomes bold
    And bring food
    Serves to new born
    And create new scene
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 1, 2016



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