Newness In Old View Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Newness In Old View

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Every moment says us and we feel
You see us from far abode galaxy
Beyond stars my mind swims fast
I have old view but newness dwells.

This is interesting definitely
To draw a picture of infinity
In search of eternal ink we move
We hope for the best art here.

Having fortune we perform actions
Actions remain in habit in mind
As thought indicates it commands
Old view opens new door for light.

Getting eternal old wisdom we feel
Definitely this cycle is in one path
Newness is a blooming flower of life
Old view still allows us to remember.

Wednesday, August 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 24 August 2016

The old way has served its purpose, and so shall the new, both is very essential to life! Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani!

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M Asim Nehal 24 August 2016

Outstanding poem, some lines are awesome: : : In search of eternal ink we move We hope for the best art here. Newness is a blooming flower of life Old view still allows us to remember.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

Beyond stars! Into another realm. Nice piece of work.

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Mihaela Pirjol 11 December 2018

A beautiful poem on the renewal of life, the cycle of life; on wisdom, truth, and spirituality: all essential elements for the sustenance of the spirit.

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Bharati Nayak 28 August 2016

'Every moment says us and we feel You see us from far abode galaxy Beyond stars my mind swims fast I have old view but newness dwells- - - Life is always changing.New experience, new insights enrich our life and we may change our our old point of view.Our conscience is our most trusted guide in life's journey.

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Valsa George 26 August 2016

Life renews itself...... Through old vistas, we see new sights! From a contented heart filled with love, when sights and scenes are viewed, they will acquire heavenly dimensions! A GREAT write! A full 10

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Abduhoo Salamath 24 August 2016

Getting eternal old wisdom we feel Definitely this cycle is in one path Newness is a blooming flower of life Old view still allows us to remember. great poem....excellent...very nice to read..

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Christopher Tye 24 August 2016

Wonderful poem so nice to read. Life and time two great constants in the universe.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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