He walks along close to me all the time
At times goes ahead, falls behind sometimes,
Talking all the while laughing aloud often
Bitter accusing words many times
What others around watching us would think?
Pretend I want not to listen, ignore
That provokes him to talk harshly more
Prompts him to go louder each time
Hindrance his voice to my onward slumber
The one silent in the light is a friend better!
This booing shadow of my mind's inner,
This conscience I bear is no better
16 02 2009
A very engaging and thought provoking write, Kesav. Thanks. Richard
wonderful..........deep insight............... the one and only being i am afraid is that HE.........
where would we be without our conscience? well penned sir.......
'This booing shadow of my mind inner, This conscience I bear, is no better...' superb write! a thought provoking one. you are awesome as always!
In reading this poem, I can almost picture Conscience walking around...flesh and bone. It's brilliant!
very very nice piece. i really enjoyed. we do have a conversation with our concious without realizing it. thanks alot for sharing it.
Nice piece, u'r conversant with wordplay...a nice style. We can't do away with our conscience, we are one.It defines our fate.
Another masterpiece Kesav....reminds me of Shakespeare's Hamlet...'Conscience doth make cowards of us all' 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
As always, your words perfect the subject and absolutely make it glow with a richness. I loved the message that you shared.