No More Acid Bottles Poem by survi sharma

No More Acid Bottles

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you, the carrier
have you ever thought?
when you fly a bottle
on our soft innocent face
it really pains....
ohhh, how can you be so cruel?
don't you have
mothers and sisters?

when you do this to us
you burn both our beauty
and the way of living.
we are helpless
is anybody listening?
apart from these
devil bottlers
when you do it
you get pleasure,
we get pain,

since you too are
human beings,
i am thus appealing
with crossing my soft
beautiful hands
please stop it
just stop it
no more acids to our face
it really pains.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhinav Sharma 21 June 2013

great poem. these incidents need to be stopped

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Simran Arora 21 June 2013

Strongly wrote....nd i m too with u 4 ds apel....gud luck.

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Kelly Seale 20 June 2013

Oh women and girls of India, don your lead masks to avert this evil. Take faith in knowing that our eyes are now open and we can see, our ears are now attuned, and we hear India's cries and feel her pain. Our hearts are hard and cold to this injustice and the wicked shall recieve their Karma back tenfold! Survi... this is a important piece.; -)

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David Wood 20 June 2013

Again this is a powerful poem. The government needs to listen to your words.

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Anoop Nair 20 June 2013

Throw it back.It works both ways

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Kinjal Sharma 08 August 2013

yeah, a great message is delivered nice one

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

a good strong write. this should be stopped. enjoyed

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Jenie Franksay 25 June 2013

strong, crisp & influencial. good work. love ur poem.

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Indranil Bhaduri 22 June 2013

A meaningful and nice write. Firstly, people who do these..are they really human beings? Do we actually know the meaning of Human being nowadays? Time to think..

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Mohammad Skati 22 June 2013

It's a nice poem and sad. It has a pretty message. I don't believe that there are people who throw acid on other people's faces. It's a crime. I denounce this criminal act.People should report this to the authorities immediately.I side with you. Thanks.

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