Darkness, coolness,
Overcrowds our happy universe,
The moon looks amused,
The stars peek fondly on
From infinity afar,
Guiding us to Treacys bar,
Headlights from passing cars,
Illuminating ghostly gorse bushes,
On the ancient Heath, so lush,
We walk without any fuss.
Tall, leggy, like a thoroughbred filly,
We used to laugh so much,
When I acted silly,
You lived life with your extreme beauty,
Dazzle, razzle,
Long brown wavy tresses, vibrant,
Cute smile, face magnetic,
Your pace always energetic.
People attracted to your friendly nature,
An open, warm heart singing, trusting,
All part of your life's chart,
Paved with peaches and cream,
With a time to dream,
You were the bright dawn of every morn,
Golden sunsets relished,
Your adorable pets treasured.
Walking across the Heath near Portlaoise,
Flat, lunar, landscape,
With the drape of black velvet,
Swept across the outer regions,
Soothing our young nerves,
Longing for the high stool,
Like a dive into a familiar pool,
Drenched with thoughts of cold lager
And Dunhill cigarettes.
Chatter about horses, friends,
boys, funny stories,
Giggling, comfortable like a pair of knitted gloves,
A time, place, graced by your presence,
Danced with the joy of giving,
Loving the simplicity of living,
An earthly goddess.
Walking across the Heath,
Talking in waves,
Repeats, retreats,
Walking with my best friend,
A straight road,
With no bad bends.
These ingrained images,
I send to you with love,
To God's holy kingdom above.
nicely created a picture for a old friend...great tribute...i felt the colorful image...
While you still think of her and write about her, she is alive forever.
There is so much joie de vivre in this poem and you have so well celebrated the life of your best friend with every line of it.10.
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. My favorite lines are.... Walking across the Heath, Talking in waves, Repeats, retreats, Walking with my best friend, A straight road, With no bad bends. These ingrained images, I send to you with love, To God's holy kingdom above. Thanks for sharing. 10
So sweet.. My condalences. Great write!
Your poems are just make sense, pretty good. well done! I do
Serious desire for embracing such a thought.... You made it light not to feel a teardropp roll down our lips
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the eternity of thoughts dear has a marvellous charm that surrounds us.... Ms Noots is your integral identity apart with a difference and you may rightly rejoice at her being in your mind for ever.