Nothin But War (C) 3-14-2010 Poem by Zahir Kijani

Nothin But War (C) 3-14-2010



Hold ya portion
Hold ya Trojan Horses
Explode the frozen force and
Make sure you stay on course when
You see evils extortion
And you see that they’re distorted
Just hope you get exported
To the 5th dimension
Pierce through like an incision
But make the right decision
Swerve past or face collision
Cause to swerve would just be easy
Collidin would add the forces
So redirect yo courses
There is no magic potion
Just full mental devotion
No raise or a promotion
Just us settin the motion
To bring a generation
Of drastic renovation
Evil’s disintegration
The people’s liberation
We’ve been misunderstood
Dipped off into the hood
Gifted in what we could
Acquitted we know we should
But no one will do it for us
We must do it our self
Yes it’s what we’re given
But who said we can’t switch the cards we’re dealt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You got into rap in this in a big way, I think some stanzas would give the poem more power though. I also write huge chunky texts once also. We have our reasons for the way we write!

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Rachel Anderson 21 March 2010

'But who said we can’t switch the cards we’re dealt' best part of the poem :)

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Zahir Kijani

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Buffalo, New york
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