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Cloud Of Tears (C) 10-1-09

Rating: 4.8

The tears poured down my eyes past my face and into the air
But they stopped from the heart of anger and evaporated forming a cloud
Overhead it poured down with all my memories of sorrow and pain
Completely black Nimbus pour down like Niagara falls
Thunderous sounds from anger and hate clapped between the cloud
No longer crying from my eyes but my tears pour just as rain
Constantly raining upon me but I remain dry oxygen squeezed from my throat
My voice can no longer speak
All my tongue is used for is taste no longer enunciating Ts
My ears are still for its purpose only to hear

I pity them because they are the bearers of the insults and belittlement
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Felicity Slaughter 08 April 2010

wow....that was.....um....WOW. I give it a 10 all the way.

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Shannon Wade 03 April 2010

This is definately a well written piece. you captured your audience through the creative flow you've presented. loved it

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Hi Corey, that's right let God take the pains away in your heart. I love your poem.. Thanks and regards.

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Lacey Unknown 22 February 2010

I truly enjoyed reading this. Beautiful. It has so much emotion in. And I would just like to say to anyone out there who may be feeling these pains, there is hope. There is a light at the end of the tunnel... just keep walking forward towards is

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wild forest- E- 18 December 2009

i like this one..... many emotions in this one.

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Matt Hunt 06 July 2010

Depression....Death.....Hate......Love broken....Is what I am.....and this poem describes me.....You MAY understand me.

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Hans Vr 10 June 2010

What a great image: tears forming a cloud and the thunder from it giving an expression to your anger, I think you are expressing in this poem a discovery of a great wisdom, not to express anger until it is gone. I agree witht the WOW's from earlier comments on this poem. It is a great piece.

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Rachel Anderson 30 May 2010

great poem, i can feel the different emotions behind it all :)

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Janaiya Stephens 25 May 2010

Great poem. I love how your emotions are varying, I vote 10

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Em Jay Christian 26 April 2010

This is more what I was expecting after reading your Bio. I enjoyed this so much more than the fragmented, crude, aggressive pieces I read before. I like the honesty here, the others seemed to feel more like hiding, putting up an angry front to keep people out. Very nice. Regards, Em Jay

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