Nothingness Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Nothingness

Rating: 5.0


While soul leaves his own body,
People say this body is a cadaver,
They gossip and relatives cry,
Attachment and detachment fight.

This is true that at the same moment,
Many feel renunciation is truth,
Nothingness is clearly seen in front,
Many tell the person has taken nothing.

He has earned many things in lifetime,
But he has taken nothing along with,
This creates confusion at the end,
Soul has even not taken his body.

Illusion covers veil over all matters,
Material things attract frequently,
But reality with change warns us,
Destruction turns development into dust.

Duality of nothingness is felt more,
In something we see internal change,
Soul leaves his body when it is damaged,
Cadaver decomposes gradually into soil.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,13 June 2018. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, June 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 13 June 2018

Sometimes I think intelligence is a curse- the animals do not fret about death and what happens after death. Even so, we a reasoning creature and as such we wonder and pursue theories and sometimes cannot see the truth before our face... very deep-thinking is created by this poem. Well done. 10

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A A Umar Udubo 13 June 2018

Curse of knowledge, or doom to knowing. It is both a curse and strictly speaking, a blessing- though one falls short of words to explain how.

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A A Umar Udubo 13 June 2018

Nothingness indeed. You couldn't have pained it more palpable Sir. Life offers nothing and takes away everything. It is hollow and delusional. Soul... body... cadaver...illusion....confusion....development into dust....Sir here is my rating.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Nudershada Cabanes 13 June 2018

A well crafted poem Sir Kumar. You have captured the essence of death. When death comes soul leaves the body.10

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Alam Sayed 13 June 2018

A philosophical insight into the ephemeral nature of things.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 November 2022

An excellent philosophical poem dear poet.. loved it

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Isabel Pimentel 06 June 2020

Illusion covers all the matters and captures us. But each material thing is destructible. We should stay away from this and practice God’s wisdom. We have to realize the nothingness.

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Heather W.B. 05 June 2020

Nothingness to something and from something to nothingness it seems to very magical in the way of perception. Nature is wonderful and you have captured the right thing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 July 2018

A very meaningful write about life and death. So very true.We take nothing along with us. Brilliantly penned.10++++

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Red Soul 26 June 2018

True. It is hard to imagine what was before we were born, and what would be left after we are gone. Either ways, a life lived is a life lived. A beautiful poem Mr Mahakul. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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