Notch Is Snatched Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Notch Is Snatched

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Indented surface of deeper edge,
This is suddenly snatched here,
Notch is never seen but felt,
Many tried to pass through this.

Autism is temporarily occurred,
Astigmatism does not allow to see,
Horrendous situation puzzles joy,
Still bravery is brought up in light.

Extravagant lifestyle motivates many,
Nothing is taken at last moment,
Jeopardy runs behind joyous man,
Without wisdom life looses rights.

Only wisdom gives pegging for future,
Pagan surrenders for higher credence,
Accepting insight is of great value,
Notch is snatched at time for conquest.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,01 July 2018. All rights reserved.

Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical ,random thoughts,victory,victory day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 01 July 2018

An excellent piece of artistry, the words are truly beautiful, expressing philiosiphy to the highest degree.10+

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Sandra Feldman 01 July 2018

So many notches, pitfalls in life Yet this unusual, great poem Still guides us and lets us see Life's Light. A brave, beautiful, deep and selective work!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 July 2018

Only wisdom gives pegging for future/Pagan surrenders for higher credence.....priceless poetic expression of great philanthropist! A brilliant piece of work! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 July 2018

Such a brilliant write, Kumarmani....10++++

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2018

Notch is like sharp edge of a knife, it is not seen and felt only when it cuts. A nice philosophic poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 July 2018

Beautiful random thoughts are conveyed brilliantly and give words of wisdom to the readers. A great write with a meaningful message.10

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Rajnish Manga 01 July 2018

The poem reflects your deep knowledge and study of human nature and its philosophical presentation. Thanks a lot.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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