Numbed Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Numbed

Rating: 5.0


The waves came to sweep me
on the pebbles

Through the ears of the breeze
I whispered you

On the wings of the albatross
I saw the rising sun

Today exhausted I am on the stone
numbed feelings my poem is

By the thread of the living theory
I am feared existence

Bottomless dungeon of inferential news
I blame the times

I forget myself; I forget myself meaninglessly
for the self-made roots


-21.12.2020 Chattogram

Numbed
Monday, December 21, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: how i feel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Britte Ninad 27 January 2021

I forget myself; I forget myself meaninglessly for the self-made roots ~ nice craftmanship

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2020

o if that is u urrr a grown up mature mannnnnn poetic thesaurusssssssssss

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 December 2020

On the wings of the albatross I saw the rising sun Beautiful poem. So good to see my Poet son. Nice photo but would love to see a photo with a smile too....... :)

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 21 December 2020

I forget myself; I forget myself meaninglessly for the self-made roots..................sounds majestic 10+

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 December 2020

A well composed piece.... Truly astonishing....5 stars *****

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