Obsession Poem by Sandra Feldman

Obsession

Rating: 5.0


Magnificent obsession,
Poetic transgression,
Endless procession
That dissipates my tears
With loving discretion,
You've been my confession
The loving obsession,
Of all of my years,

Wednesday, June 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 07 June 2018

Now this is just a perfect poem in every sense of the word

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2018

Sandra, such an awesome piece....10++++

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Susan Williams 06 June 2018

Talk about flowing rhymes to create a poem that is smooth as silk! ! ! I really like this rhyme scheme in this poem- -we could all learn from you how to weave a magic spell over readers! Excellent.10 million kudos! .

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Kelly Kurt 06 June 2018

Years have their advantages. Enjoy them!

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Robert Murray Smith 06 June 2018

Sandra, to have poetry so close we never have to shut the gates.+++10 Robert

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