Odor Of Feminity Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Odor Of Feminity

Rating: 4.5


The aroma that rises
When the olive like shades
That lurks in the corners
Glazed, seek the honey like browns
They melt, the greens, giving life
Sifts through the hungry bones
Neither furious nor kind
They whiff across
Like a kitten amused by the
Gushing fountain
Like a child, sleeping
In images the white I wore
The black string in my flying hair
I wrote on the wind my name
I left on the glass my perfume
Trail of scents that followed
Appetizing and sweet
Your sleeping senses they greet
So maddening so foolish
With matted air
He breathes
The odor of feminity

sequel to the poem 'odor of feminity' by poet rengeth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a fiminine poem with oily scented touch, a feminine call for others to reach the depth of that ocean with it's precious menerals, it's pearls, guarded by a sandy beach...10++++

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2009

Splendid work once again.............

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Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

as an afterthoughjt just lemme add qoute.. Premji premji (5/6/2009 4: 07: 00 AM) odor of femininity is the odor of life............... how true cheers

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Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

hi reshma you done wonders to the word chemistry how tender and alluring...so very potent...stirs the being and arouses the senses wonderful cheers

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Angelic(Annie) Female 08 May 2009

Written so beautifully Reshma- well expressed of a women's femininity to the extreme :)

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Anjali Sinha 26 May 2009

OMG the chemistry that you possess lovely poem Resh I loved it a tenner from meeeee anjuuuuuu

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 17 May 2009

nice poem resh............but the..comment of mr sathyanarayanan mvs below is perversion to max....................(Resh! I'm getting drowsy.............I keep looking at ur photo........mmmmmmmmm........sumptuous) ........god knows wat he dopes lookin at ur pic for so long

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David Hart 15 May 2009

Very well written piece!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 May 2009

Resh! I'm getting drowsy.............u are an enchanting...........angel......after reading ur romantics, I keep looking at ur photo........mmmmmmmmm........sumptuous

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Surya . 12 May 2009

odour of feminity none can escape.none should.very nice poem.posted 10 mam surya

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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