Thirst...
Parting between lips
drops a cup of hissing feels
sweet and kiss thirsty…
Hunger...
Perching on the mind
searches out for tasty food
down yard lust hungry…
And Sleep...
Eaten swollen breads
drunk on sweetened bottle wine
lie bodies half sleepy...
12 10 08
realistic and beautiful... the usage of words dint let the meaning get lost.... : D
hunger: the largest religion on earth! better than all known religions!
a fine image of all three sir...and also you bring out the various faces of each....10
these three constitute 'triad' brahma vishnu maheswara... father son and the holy spirit
Good images come to my mind here...strong write...thank you
Beautiful and exquisite portrayal of Thirst, Hunger and Sleep... Really enjoyed reading... Thanks... Regards, Kamran
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful....thought provoking....eloquent indeed!