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Chandini Jaswal
India
Chandini Jaswal
India
Oh Mother!
Rating: ★5.0
A mother, She is hard to describe,
Cause whatever she does is not bribed.
You can observe her care,
When she cooks your food with her hands bare.
She wants it all best;
From your rest to your test,
From your chest to your vest.
Oh mother! Forgive me for all my sins,
Forgive me! For littering the bins.
Oh mother, You are very bold,
And you are worth your weight in gold.
Cause whatever she does is not bribed.
You can observe her care,
When she cooks your food with her hands bare.
She wants it all best;
From your rest to your test,
From your chest to your vest.
Oh mother! Forgive me for all my sins,
Forgive me! For littering the bins.
Oh mother, You are very bold,
And you are worth your weight in gold.
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I dedicate this poem to my mother; who is my guide, philosopher, cook, driver, washerwoman, tutor, friend and even my biggest critic.
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike
22 November 2019
Well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. A beautiful creation.
Thanks for sharing, Chandini.
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Chandini Jaswal
22 November 2019
Thank you sir. Your words of appreciation have motivated me to write more.
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Solomon Senxer
21 November 2019
" Cause whatever she does is not bribed."
" She wants it all best"
Two among many lines I love... Thank you for describing mother accurately...!
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Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Channel
13 September 2019
The poem with ryhming, dedication towards the mother,
Confessing the sin, well written poet, thank you poet.
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Chandini Jaswal
15 September 2019
Many a thanks for your kind words sir! Delighted to know that you liked the poem.
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon
17 July 2018
A lovely poem dedicated to your Mother. I like the way you have described her as your guide, philosopher, cook, washerwoman and a critic too.There is no one in this world who can equal the love of a mother. A mother's love is the purest and the most unconditional love. Thank you Chandini. Be blessed.10++
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Chandini Jaswal
27 July 2018
There is no one in this world who can equal the love of a mother. A mother's love is the purest and the most unconditional love. Couldn't have said it better.
Thank you ma'am for the kind words
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Anna Osipova
10 April 2017
Great poem! I can see your love to your mother in every word. You have a great mother and she has a great daughter!
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Aradhika Sharma
04 July 2016
Reminds me of that famous quote: If evolution really works, how come mothers only have two hands?
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Chandini Jaswal
15 September 2019
Couldn't have said it better myself! Thank you Aradhika aunty!
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Unnikrishnan E S
28 June 2016
Hi Chandini,
Good poem, out of your love for your mother.
I invite you to read my poem She Never Had a Sunday expressing same sentiments.
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Dr Antony Theodore
24 September 2015
From your rest to your test,
From your chest to your vest.
Oh mother! Forgive me for all my sins,
I liked these lines. it touched me Please forgive me Mum. beautiful and simple and you convey so much of love and adoration for your mother. love your poem thank you
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