Oh! My Love! Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Oh! My Love!

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Oh! My Love........
usher in fresh air
laying here
stitched with venom of love
scared eyes and the fragile look
scanty skin spread nascent smell..

Let we write a new story
where the venom of love
usher in fresh Air....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandrashekar A Posy Poet 04 November 2009

wow....amazing verse........................kudos!

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Ramesh T A 03 November 2009

Let fresh air enliven your love!

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Ejaz Khan 03 November 2009

Love, looked with different eyes....., yes it cotains even a venom or at least have a disasterous effect on many it touches, is it due to its venom or that the receptive bodies were impure, is yet to be studied and decided, a thought provoking write!

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Catrina Heart 03 November 2009

astoundingly great poem............Thanks!

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