Old Age Poem by Howard The Motivational Poet Simon

Old Age

Rating: 4.9


The hand shakes
The back aches
The heart quakes
Then life breaks.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 05 March 2011

This is a sad but true summation of the way I feel as I turn 76 years young today. Good Write, short but true, Your friend Lynn

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Walterrean Salley 11 July 2012

The truth if I've ever heard it. And we're all headed that way.10

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 26 July 2012

I love this poem so much...

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Karen Sinclair 03 October 2012

So true... sometimes it is a relief to glance on a minimalist write as it gives the mind a chance to condense and appreciate the full meaning.... this is so true... tyvm karen

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Ruth Walters 25 February 2014

Isn't that the truth : D

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 June 2018

The symptom of old age is nicely executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 26 March 2018

it is going in today. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 27 January 2016

Nicely thought..............

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Nosheen Irfan 27 January 2016

Spot on. Brevity is the soul of the wit. Your poem illustrates that well.

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Roseann Shawiak 16 January 2016

Your poem is pretty well right on. As we age our beings become more frail usually. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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